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after discord's reform，At discord and fluttershy's tea party，An unexpected guest broke into and broke the tea party，Discord found that the stranger was a colt，And discord must now be her nanny，How will discord be tortured by this pony?ps（This story happened after the ninth season）and ps2（I am a Chinese, so I still have many shortcomings in translation. I hope you can point out my grammatical mistakes，thank u）
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Foal = young equine
Colt = young male equine
Filly = young female equine
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thank u，and I try to update one or two chapters every day
Colt is a boy, filly is a girl and foal is a kid cause I noticed you keep calling the female foal a colt.
Maybe discord should think about adopting this kid. She Maybe nuts but ao is he
11377124
I'm sorry. I'll correct it
It's a very cute and wonderful story. Just gotta not be overly critical considering this is a translation! In forgiving the obvious mistake, I ended up loving it.
Love the work!Both cute and heartwarming! If there s any translation problem, just feel free to ask me!
We both worked a lot on this(he wrote and I drew the picture that become the cover of the fanfic)! And if you decided to give a downvote please please please explain why so we can try to avoid that mistake the next time! I will be really pissed off if you don't respect the hard work we've done and just give a downvote without even explain yourself! 
PS: for anyone who is reading this comment, the author is not a native speaker and is not that confident with English so please be more tolerant with the translation.In fact we have to use apps to translate most of the chapter and try to polish the work as best as we can.The best way to enjoy this fanfic is by reading the original one on Fimtale(which is just the Chinese version of Fimfiction)! I will make sure to remind the author to add the link to the original work!
PPS:Please try to respect my boyfriend's(yes, you saw that right, the author is my boyfriend ) work
11377231
I will try my best to translate
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11377249
We understand and we're happy you're both here!! But I suggest seeking out an editor. Translation Apps aren't always accurate, they do not capture fluency and proper grammar. I suggest seeking out an editor and send them the story first. They will correct the story so both native and experienced English speakers will understand it better.
11377358
Thanks for your advice. I'll try to find some professionals
11377248
I think its interesting so far. I never seen a story where discord gets someone who likes his chaos.
11377489
thank u，But don't forget that Fluttershy also likes
Discord's chaos
11377518
Not in the same way she puts up with because she wants discord to be happy but she prefers things being normal considering she always makes him change everything back before leaving her home from their tea.
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Updated，New roles will appear in the next update，and From here, the story will be divided into two perspectives
Discord doesn't get that she never had to trust for so long that she acts mean but like he used to.
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There are two chapters in the next update，and I hope you can go to my homepage，There are pictures of the little Milky Way，I wish you like it.
偶然在首页上看到，建议首先注意一下大小写问题，以及不要用中文的全角标点符号（从简介里我注意到的有逗号和括号），用英文的半角符号，这样至少一眼看上去不会那么奇怪（
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Thanks for your suggestion. I will try to correct these problems(谢谢)
Can I ask what you think of this story？Maybe I can improve my story
I'm starting to wonder if twilight made a mistake because it looks like she is an orphan.
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Why do you say that?Did Twilight do anything?
In fact, I didn't understand your mean
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Twilight said she found milky-way dad. Now milky-way is saying that she grew up on the streets without adult care. So I wonder if twilight made a mistake when she thought she found him.
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Maybe it's hard to find them by children's ability, and they disappear when they are conscious, and there is no clue to their parents,But twilight is different，She's a princess，Even if it is found, it is not particularly absurd，There is also a new chapter about Little Milky Way telling his past
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Yeah I saw that and personally if that the parent give the kid to discord because he is better. I only saw the second part in the morning.
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But I think no parents will let their children wander
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Discord will but secretly keeping an eye out while pretending that he doesn't care. But this guy doesn't seem to really care about the kid. Also twilight isn't perfect despite being a princess. You ask the fans and you can find that although she is a good person she can make stupid moves.
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Excuse me, who do you mean by this guy？Is it disord?
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The so called father. He doesn't seem to actually care.
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In a sense, he may not care about Little Milky Way as much as Thompson?
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True but if you bring a child into your life you have a duty to care about them.
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Thompson's parents are irresponsible bastards，Thompson also had a miserable childhood,By the way, Thompson still loves Little Milky Way.But I won't be the spoiler, just wait for the next update.Thank you for your support
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Yeah but he not an adult and although he can help he might be better off somewhere else as well.
It is a sweet story, very reminiscent of the show. My advice for editing might be to use Grammarly. It's freely accessible and relatively intuitive.
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Thank you for your advice.And thank you for liking this article
If there is a market for children the princesses better get on and destroy it as soon as possible.
Here’s hoping she makes it back safe.
I don't get the feeling she a safe as should be.
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Is she an insecure person?Who is she?
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Little milky-way.
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Sorry, my understanding is that Little Milky Way is a dangerous pony?Or another meaning?
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No I don't think she is safe in what supposed to her home. I don't why but I just have a feeling.
Is the pony male or female?
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female
11418299
I'm sorry that you have doubts about this because of the previous translation problems
I knew it. Twilight didn't think things through and put a child in danger. She should have gotten more information about her before deciding on something. What exactly has Celestia taught her. It starting look like twilight is stupider about danger than most kids. She should investigated why milky-way family wasn't looking for her considering if they had been twilight would have easily been finding them.
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Maybe Twilight didn't think enough about it,but don't forget the cunning of the unicorn.He even hurt a child like this.
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True but adults are supposed to be smarter than kids. Not an alicorn princess who seems naive about the fact that everyone has a dark side just some people give into it more than others.
11418370
I agree with you
If this guy care about milky-way he force her to see that running away isn't going to make her and will make discord miserable.
11419677
Another of my novels has been published
She doesn't get love because she been without so long. She needs to figure out her powers and help discord. He loves so much that her not wanting him is destroying him.