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Lil Penpusher


Put the words in the bag and nopony gets hurt

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CLOCK IS TICKING, TWILIGHT, CLOCK IS TICKING!

EVERYTHING IS FINE
THE PRINCESSES LIVE
I AM PERFECTLY SANE
THE MAGIC OF FRIENDSHIP SHALL ENDURE

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Chrysalis starts deadpanning when Midnight walks at her like a Working Joe saying "You are becoming hysterical".

:eeyup:Eeyup.
That'll do it alright.

I feel like a part of me died with this chapter. :fluttershbad::fluttercry::raritycry:

Dammit Twi! :fluttershysad:


good job by the way

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Suffer not the traitors. The Regency must endure.

Very Interesting Chapter

Its was also interesting to see a more "Canon" side of things rather than EaW.

Another interesting idea will be if Midnight ended in Ponylon on Earth and saw what Buckharin and the rest of transformed ponies & humans had done, combined with her reaction to Germany & Japan.(If you understand the reference)

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Mhm. We'll see where her dimensional travels (of friendship) take our wicked benevolent Regent.

Glad you liked it though! Make sure to drop a like if you haven't so we can hit that feature, as well :rainbowdetermined2:

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Twi has to be put down!

When will Celestia/Daybreaker and Luna/Nightmare Moon show up!?

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Who knows, who knows. The clock is ticking, after all.

Maybe if you stuck around and saw a journey's end...?

:trixieshiftright:

If nothing else, it's incredibly amusing reading the happenings with Queen Chrysalis. It's a mad universe if she's the sane one in all of this.

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Chrysalis being absolutely flabbergasted was too funny not to make a thing.

That was a good story.

Nice story

Maybe an excerpt of the rewritten friendship journal or a new letter to the princess could be an interesting theme for a new chapter. For example what friendship lesson Twilight learned while dealing with Wingbardy.

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Oh, I like that idea, actually. :trixieshiftright:

H-holy regent? What do we do with Spi- I mean the Traitors corpse in the s-sacred castle ground?

Great new chapter!

Happy to she that Midnight didn't destroy another city/Kingdom for once!:yay:

Even though it was freaking Wingbardy:twilightangry2:

Oohhhh looks like we reached the critical point of this story!

The reaction of the two princesses.

Why do I have a particularly bad feeling about this...

That was a good chapter. I wonder how badly the Princesses are going to react.

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Finally~! :pinkiecrazy:

I hope they have a good reason on why the heck did they disappear in the first place, and what took them so frickin long!?

The Clock is Ticking Twilight...
The Clock is Ticking.

Yeah.. she's lost it. Completely.

Midnight is here.

That was a good story. I wonder if Twilight can survive In the mirror world without her sanity or if she's doomed.

Okay, so now a VERY pissed near-reality destroying normally Alicorn Midnight is... the human world's problem now. Sunset has her work cut out for her. Like, she is very screwed.

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This feels like a BS cliffhanger. They should have FRICKIN executed her!

Luckily for Sunset, humanity ain't full on pussies on that death sentence topic than ponies do.

So, let's set up the nukes then. :pinkiecrazy:

Edit: Done. Please don't delete this due to the little profanity and gif.

"...Twilight, did... you get our note?"

Luna's voice made me blink into what seemed like empty space.

"Your... note?"

"We sent it to Ponyville before we left," Celestia clarified further. "Did you not receive it?"

"We were on vacation , Twilight. We were in Zebrica this whole time." Luna spoke a little faster than her sister, but was clear as day - or night - in her speech.

"I guess she really didn't get the note, then," Luna quietly said, though I heard her still.

"It appears so," Celestia answered, before stepping forward and looking up to me again. "Twilight?"

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Wait!!!???

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Wwaaaaaaaaiiiiitttttttt! You telling me? They took an innocent vacation to Zebrica, and conveniently left a note to Twilight straight away.

BUT, due to Twilight's own gullible and dumbass mistake of NOT reading her dang letters/email. Equestria and every other kingdom got f*** up!!??


So, ALL of this mess up evil shit ( Spike and most of her own friends are brutally killed and forgotten. Turning dictator, enslaving, and killing her fellow innocent ponies. Invading, attacking, and destroying other innocent kingdoms. Besides the Changelings kinda deserved it. And ALMOST potentially having world domination or world destruction. Etc.... )

All because Twilight stupidity forgot to read her damn E-M-A-I-L!!??


To Twilight/Midnight;

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And;

I will bury you so completely, the earth will turn over a thousand times before your body is dug up.

Quote of Crimson One from Project Wingman.

She is so more f*** up, insane, and beyond IDIOTIC than even Hitler and Stalin combined!

Half of the imagery was the same as ever. The two sisters coming to power, ruling together, and the eventual banishment of Nightmare Moon. The return of the latter and return of Luna, and the new element bearers - me, as well as... others? Wait... there were ponies other than me holding the elements of harmony? But... I don't remem-

Irrelevant. Forget.

-ber... huh. Oh well. The elements are hardly relevant anyway, as one of the new glass imagery showed. It was my ascension, the merging of the elements of harmony and crystal heart, all flowing together into me, to become something new, something-

She purposely forgot her own best friends!!!!!!????? Spike's own death is very terrible, but THIS!!??

Welp, she is purely irredeemable. Time to put her out, permanently!

"I never needed to teach ponykind anything, or the creatures of the world," I concluded. Tears escaped my eyes, noticeable from the outside only from the faint vapor that they immediately turned into. The eyes they hailed from were deadset on only one thing now - or, two rather.

"I need to rebuild the world - all of it - from the ground up! I need to start anew, start again and prevent the rot you have wrought!"

My wings fluttered as the sphere originating from atop the sharp tip of my horn grew larger and larger. An eye of mine twitched briefly, and I opened my mouth again.

"I will rebuild... I will rebuild!" I insisted. "I will make everything whole again... I'll turn back time, reset the clocks and I will rebuild!" I argued, again with nopony. "So begone!" I shouted.

Two magical auras lit the scene in front of me. Celestial yellow and lunar blue.

"So begone! Begone, begone, begone!" I shouted in the onslaught of a mad fit.

My eyes widened and my pupils dilated as a great force left my possession. There was no sound as the black sphere - now taller than even the alicorns themselves - flew towards them. There was the glimmer from their horns, and the quick, sudden flicker of spells being cast. All of this, in the span of two seconds. Maybe three.

And amidst that scene was one, deafening shout that dominated it all.

"BEGONE AND DIE!!!"

Me: Alright, that's IT!!!! I have enough of this BULL!!!

*Me teleporting right next to Midnight*:

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*Midnight painfully and excruciatingly destroyed from existence, both corrupt body and dark irredeemable soul.

Sorry, I just couldn't take it anymore of Midnight's delusional bullcrap on blaming everybody. And beyond f*** up attempt of planetcide everybody/everypony.

I hope you enjoyed the read (and hope you've verified your clock!

Don't want to sound rude. But, if you keep this up with the time/clock obsession and little cliche puns/jokes. You might end up as these two characters from Alice in Wonderland;

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What can I say? Discord is a benevolent god.

-when he chooses to be, anyway.

Let's just say he has his reasons for not (literally) snapping Midnight out of existence straight away. But, I suppose that falls into the realm of spoilers for the sequel to come.


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And oh yes, I promise you I am quite done with the clock analogies for now. :moustache:

TICK TOCK TICK TOCK

All the creatures in equestria pales in comparison to a serious Discord.

After all, all of reality are nothing more than a playground for the God of Chaos.

All my advice to twilig- Midnight is that don't mess with reality, that's Discords turf.

"Being tardy... a dreadful crime against friendship!"

Alright.

I get what you're doing there, turning the old Twilight's petty fears into the dreadful paranoid hatred of tyrant Twilight and making It resonate within the old friendship between her and spike

But i cant help to wheeze at the quote on its own:rainbowlaugh:

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Hey, going mad doesn‘t mean she can leave behind her history of being an A+ student. :ajsmug:

"Twilight, we didn't 'test' anypony," Celestia explained slowly.

"We were on vacation, Twilight. We were in Zebrica this whole time." Luna spoke a little faster than her sister, but was clear as day - or night - in her speech.

"Just... what happened while we were gone?" Celestia finally added.

Celestia and Luna be like
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As abrupt as this seems, it feels basically probably what I imagine if a pony tries to stand up against a K3 civilization. Discord just brushes them off like ants.

Does he revert everything too just to mess with her?

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through kinda ridiculous that they just up and left without even telling twilight to her face, celestia and luna 'r stupid

oh. well. uhm. starting off strong, i see!

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