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This story is a sequel to All That We Become: A Normal Little Girl
Brayok, the most isolated of the ancient four, has been spending his year apart from his friends exploring the modern oceans. Finding little of the world he knew; he comes across a lone creature in peril that leads him to an underwater metropolis. This new and foreign location leaves Brayok with an unexpected friend and a reunion with a deadly enemy from his past.
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my one "problem" is that this has an open end to it
but i suppose that just means there'll be more stories in this series, which is a good thing
This was a really good story. It says a lot about the author when they can use completely original characters alone for the story on a fanfiction series and it still turns out great. Well done Marezinger Z!
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Thank you. Working without any existing MLP elements for this one was actually my main concern. I'm glad it's still enjoyable.
You sir, are a master story teller. I've been waiting a long time for this one and it was worth it. Hope you have big plans for the ancient four's reunion, because I am so hyped!
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I was looking forward to working with Brayok too and once it was done, I really loved how it turned out.
I appreciate that.