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Awkward.

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Bendy #1 · Jun 5th, 2022 · · 1 ·

This was a nice read. Glad I inspired you.

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Thanks! You pump out stories like nobody's business and I enjoy the scenarios you have. I have no idea why this one in particular just stuck in my head. It started out as a hardcore porn thing, but devolved into this weirdness.

Absolutely brilliantly-written.

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I doubt that, but thanks!

Kinda feel like a sequel to bendys store 😂

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Maybe, if it's like a thousand years later. lol. These ponies only know Princess Twilight, and don't remember Celestia....

Is their gonna be a sequal to this?

Really good writing, enjoyed this!

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Probably not... But who knows!


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That's high praise coming from you! Thanks!

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Well I hope you do a sequal and I did enjoy this too

1656462 which website ?

Comment posted by Nova Star Sparkle deleted Jun 6th, 2022

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agreed and hope the same, it was a quite funny read aswell

Damn, this is something. I like that there was a little positive emotion in there, though I wish this story was a little longer.

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Thank you! I love when my favorite author comments on my stuff. Yeah, in the "pure porn" iteration of this, he was constantly worried that if he fucked up Twilight would replace him. She was much colder to him in that one, and it was a lot less of an act.... very similar to your Twilight in your "How to" series, actually.

I was thinking of doing a continuation / sequel from Twilight's POV, but I feel like that would be a lot less interesting. I dunno. Maybe I'll push it out. This was also a cheeky experiment to write in the present tense, similar to how you write, but from the first person. Maybe now that I think about it, quite a bit of the style of this is mimicking you... huh.

Lets see:
Free use Twilight
Present tense
Angsty/devoted stallion/guard(?)
Double life/attitude thing...

Hmm... Maybe I should link your stories as well. lol.

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