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this is honestly one of the most oddly compelling, upsetting, insane, decadently hot smut series on the entire site
i'd love to read more (Spirit kissing boys sounds especially good to me) and also know what's coming next
Kinda would love to see a follow-up where Dash is in control
What superfun said. Will there be a follow-up where Dash is in control?
The has been quite the interesting series, to say the least. I wouldn't mind seeing Twilight get called out on the aforementioned public shenanigans; if not by Rainbow, then either Rarity or AJ were mentioned.
Another installment in the 'pride is not condoned' series.
Honestly, I'd enjoy a subversion of these stories when the 'third party' actually shows some spine and tells either the douchebag dom to go screw themselves or the similarly manipulative sub to do the same.
So now you introduce career cucking. Your imagination is truly wonderful and scary.
Happy to see another story in the series and more Spirit. Definitely would love more of him kissing boys, even if just offhand mentions like here. I really enjoyed how casually bisexuality appeared in the series earlier — something about that just spoke to my soul. Of course, more Spirit/Twilight dynamic would be lovely.
Now, since you mentioned it — will you give us a glimpse of what's coming next?
This. Was. Amazing.
So many different emotions, and great back and forth conversation. I loved it.
I have no idea how far in the future this is, but I just pictured Twilight in the entire story as Princess Celestia sized like the finale. That made the scenes of her talking with Dash at the end work really well for me.
Fucking love this series
Thisnseries is always a rough read because it's really, really hard to tell where lines are crossed. I mean, was Doublemint's spiel about Lux true, or not, and if it was, was Twilight actually upset or just trying to manipulate Dash?
It's never clear where kink ends and abuse begins, and that makes it really hard to get a read on more than a small handful of characters.
You should replace all the “sir Rainbow dash”, with “dame Rainbow dash”, because sir is for men and dame is for women (or stallions and mares in this case).
This series is... impossible to describe. I have no idea how to feel, no idea what to expect, and yet I just want it to keep going. I remember commenting in one of the previous stories that I never knew how much I wanted a happy ending in a story until I read this series, but honestly I don’t know what a happy ending would even look like at this point.
Admittedly the premise is executed a bit strangely (I'm with Rainbow a bit here in feeling confused about how things went down) and it is a bit too gratuitous with the descriptions of what's happening with Lux (assuming she is actually pretty young). That aside the blowjob scene was outstanding, especially the climax with Rainbow relating to what it would be like for Twilight based on her own experience.
I spent all day reading this series. I hate you for making me feel emotions in a clip story. I will read the next one religiously
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I can imagine Twilight forbidding Spirit from fucking her, and he's only allowed to get fucked by other guards just to mess with him.
💬... Yes, DEFINITELY want to know what you what's coming up next
... Also, FOR SOME REASON!
I'd like to see Twi turn the tables, and turn into Catherine the Great!
One of the great things about this tale is that it CONVINCINGLY subverts expectations about how I'd expect Twilight Sparkle to act.
I'm just as bewildered as Dash, and hope it's all a ruse on Twi's part, and she's engaging in "real politic".
Anyways... it keeps you speculating, engaged, disturbed and perturbed.
All in all a great story!
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Well... depends...
There is Sir Integra Fairbrook Wingates Hellsing...
Depends on how the thing works AND what is implied by the title.
Need more! I need to see what happens with all this sexy intrigue! The factory, Lux, Dashie, the guards, Princess Twilight the Whorespy, EVERYPONY!
Huh, this story is a whole lot more... gentle than your other stories. It's nice to see Twilight finally treating Boot well, she even calls him her stallionfriend! Is our little Twilight finally learning to love? Even gaining some self worth maybe? I hope all this gets addressed more directly at some point.
This raises so many questions! Are we going to get to see her being a 'free use slut' with others besides her guards sometime? It'd be fun to see just what she gets up to around town. And with Rarity, especially. I'd LOVE to see what their dynamic is like.
Is this canonical with the other stories? I hope we get to see her bring her other friends into the fold. And maybe even having some group activities together.
Finally the other bearers are introduced.
Man this is so fucked up. All of these stories. But I can't stop reading, I gotta know what happens next.
But why though???? Isn't Twilight super Smart and intelligent. Letting the teachers fuck her for the sake of fucking her; that's fine. But doing it just so Twi can keep her grades up?
......I'm not buying it.
We already heard all about Twilight being fuck by her guards, Shining Armor and Cadance, and The Cloudsdale Diplomats.
Now we wanna know about her Teachers and other grown adults, The Apple Family, Rarity, and Sodapop.
God I love this series its too dang good.
This series is incredibly hot and I eagerly look forward to seeing where it goes!
Hopefully we'll see more about the nature of Rainbow's new living situation with Lux and possible mentorship, but also what Twilight's been getting up to with the other bearers. Keep it up, what you're putting together is compelling as heck.
What's Twilight's motivation here?Why did Dash need to see her being a whore?Just go with"Dash, the rumors are not true"or"It's my fucking business"or something like this.I feel like you are the master at degrading ponies lol
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me nether, i think twily always was a sex addict Oo
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My intent was for this to be a couple months after Twilight's castle popped up in Ponyville. Maybe a year or two later. But I haven't been too concerned about it and honestly I'm sure I've been inconsistent.
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Yeah, Twilight was smart, but so are all the other students at this prestigious school. Twilight's a big fish in an even bigger ocean, and she needed every edge she could get to succeed and become Princess Celestia's star pupil.
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Why not both? :)
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Thank you! I felt pretty proud about the BJ myself.
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In my head, Twilight was realizing she was not getting through to Dash. Twilight thought she was clear in her desire for Dash to drop it, but Twilight also knew Dash is extremely stubborn and would likely keep getting into trouble unless Twilight did something to reset her world view.
And, woof. What a thing to master in, huh?
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As for what's coming next ... I suppose I ought to figure something out with Lux and the Guards. But I don't want to just do a thing where Lux gets fucked a bunch of times and magically enjoys it. So I dunno what it'll look like. I also have some plans for her and Twilight taking on the establishment, man. Probably a bunch of Twilight cucking Spirit? And Lux's parents will eventually have to come to learn what's happened to their daughter. So I guess a focus on Lux for a bit, since I owe her some screen time.
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Thank you all for continuing along with me on this twisted journey. I'm having fun writing it, and I hope you're having fun reading it.
Fucking hell, I swear your stories get hotter and hotter with every addition to this series. You legit might be my favorite clop author writing on this site right now. And I say that as someone who reads a lot of clop.
I love the little hints you put in you stories that suggest prequels and sequel, It's really clever!
This one took me some time to get around to. I was initially a bit sceptical about the premise. It wouldn't be the first time a second character from the mane six gets introduced into a story/series and then it just turns into lol they fucked, the end with none of the surrounding story that made earlier parts so good -- and this is absolutely not one of those!
The factory thing is about my only gripe with this one. Yeah I get why it's there but it just didn't quite work for me. Not sure why exactly, though. Then again, it is still keeping very much in spririt (lol) with the earlier parts, by which I mean things being really fucked up yet at the same time, also fucking hot.
It was great to see some of Spirit!
I both dread yet look immensely forward to wherever you take this series next.
Finished the quintology and it was a massive emotional experience. It delivers extremely efficient prose that shows me all the emotions of the characters involved.
I first believed it was a psychological thriller, with an evolving storyline describing conflicts to be solved. Now I know its main focus is porn and the sex isn't there as as a narrative device.
It's still one of the most gripping stories I've read on this site, but I know I shouldn't write long rambling opinions so I'll stop here.
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I care! Thanks!
To clarify: I have no desire to influence/manipulate the author to change anything..
Everything you write leaves me with something to keep thinking about over and over. I still think about some specific lines of dialogue from your various stories, and I definitely think a few parts of this one will stick with me for a long time. It's incredible how visceral and emotionally gripping these are! Complex clop is always the hottest, and your stories have so much subtle complexity in them.
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Which parts will stick with you for a long time?
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The scenes where Twilight says she isn't Rainbow Dash's friend, her bathing with Spirit, and Rainbow Dash taking Lux to her home have been stuck in my head over and over the past few days.
I love how each of the stories builds on the others.
I really want to read more of this universe.
I really want to see more of this series. Not only are the sex scenes really well written, and incredibly hot. But the story behind it all is really engaging.
I also wouldn't mind seeing a little side story about some of the stuff Lux has been doing with the guards.
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Thanks! I got notifications as you read each of the stories. I hope one day to return to this, but who knows what the future holds.
This is like Twilight's one redeeming line in the whole series.
I kinda like just how vicious damn near everyone in this universe is.
Thanks for writing.
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Actually when it comes to Knighthood it is Sir regardless of gender.
I really want to see what happens next. How would Lux interact with Scootaloo? Would Scoots also work at the factory? Or maybe all three of the CMCs could help out. If Twi needs help getting the thing built she should ask her friends. The apples are great with construction and could be convinced to do some "free" labor, fluttershy basically has an army of animals at her disposal, not to mention the ear of the most powerful being in the mlp universe. Also where's Spike in all this? He hasn't been mentioned once that I can remember.