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Might not be a love story but at least it has a happy ending :)
6,666 words.
I see what you did there, nice.
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I swear I've seen this before...
Edit: Nevermind. Nice twist, though I did guess at it among a few other possibilities.
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You. I like you. You get me.
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The weird part was that FIMFiction had a very different word count than my word processor. So on my word processor, my lovingly crafted story had 6666 words, but on FIMFiction it had 6784 words for some reason. I then had to go through and butcher it to make it fit.
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lol
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Where? I love these kinds of stories so I'd be pretty excited to read another take on this. Admittedly, TwixSombra slave is a thing you can find pretty easy. That specifically is not a new idea. Most of my stuff is experimantal for me in some way, but this is not really. The only thing Itried to do with this one is make the porn bits hard to skip through, so people felt like they had to read them. I wasn't very succesful.
So what did you all think? I know it's not great, but I'm curious what you thought about it, if anything. Even the folks who downvoted it!
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I respect that devotion. Also have read the story since then, and gotta say it's beautifully twisted, very nice!
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Name just seemed familiar.
I liked it, though mostly for pornographic reasons. I always appreciate good writing and a story with a plan other than the clop itself.
Love the (more literal than usual) mind-rape. The last line was fun, too.
Dying to know what the inspirational image is. Could you reveal its Derpibooru number?
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Thanks! I debated a bunch over the last line. That was going to be the penultimate line, and then I needed to cut stuff so it became the last line. The other one wasn't very good anyways.
Picture ID... Yeah. No idea how to get that. It's a picture of Twilight giving Sombra a Blow job, and his penis is hilariously too big. But I was focused on Twilight anyways. Just search for "colored wingtips" and "penis on face" in derpibooru. That'll get you there.
Honestly, this was the best M-rated Twilight X Sombra fic I've read in a while. Though, it sucks that this was not a romance, it was still good.
I loved that twist you did there.
Seriously! I was reading one part that confused me a little, at first. But then, as I read on, I was like."Oh, I get it now."
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Thanks! I appreciate it. Was there anything in particular you liked or didn't like? And I thought I was pretty clear that there wouldn't be any romance.I mean, This is not a love story. lol.
I might make installments of this, but it's super low on my priority list. My muse is a fickle beast though, so who knows. I've got a big project I've been working on for a while, double down is 30% of the way to an update, and I'mjust waiting for something shitty to happen so I can update countdown. But if I wake up tomorrow and need to write this, I will. Admittedly, a story arc for this would be strange. The trick is only for the first chapter. After that,it really is just a regular day in the life of slave Twilight, and that might not be as interesting.
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Yep, you pretty much made it clear that there is no romance in this, even naming the fic that.
I actually don't mind it, though, since the oneshot was really good. I could really see you put so much thought and creativeness into this one. I honestly don't think you should turn this into an arc, as it is fine the way it is. Plus, you are right, it would be rather strange.
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what he said
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See:
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Your word processor probably is set to not count "a," "an," and the like, but FimFiction is. That's my guess.
I actually hope you make a sequel to this one.
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this was a good read, I liked it.
This was really good, very well written and engaging, the ending especially was awesome, loved it
Well then. That was certainly a hell of a fic. And that ending, WHOO. That was a doozy.
I love this. :)