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RunningThroughTheAshes


Dethrone the dictaphone, hit it in its funny bone, that's where they expect it least.

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Well, this is one of a few times I've ever said this about a bad ending type fic, but I hope this gets a sequel.

Have you thought about extending this to the others?

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Keep up the Good Work! i Give you My Favorite and i hope to see more in the future! ~ :heart:

(ask me, i have some pretty neat ideas...)

It's interesting in my opinion. Sure the idea for the corruption plot isn't new, but a nice corruption story certainly is always a good read. Though the clop could use some work. It could definitely be more descriptive in my opinion. It seems rather short and I miss the passion of it. The dialogue seems good the way it is.

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I'd rather see Dash have to destroy them.

I woudl like to see this continued with NMM winning, and maybe a few stallions instead of tentacles

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