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I'm not the greatest writer, but specialising on short and simple stories of cute ponies from MLP:FiM and G5. Just your fan from the UK.

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Inspired by the fanart Meme (smol)
By artist ShadowReindeer

Pipp decides to enlist the help of her friends and sister for a live stream displaying the many ways of taking pictures on a phone. The rest of them seem happy to help, but Zipp would rather not help at all.

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“That’s the perfect spot,” Pipp complimented as she turned the phone’s setting’s to ‘share mode’, “You can see that the light of the sun show’s this handsome stallion’s face and… er… features well and capture the Sheriff of Maretime Bay wonderfully.”

Ohh somebody likes him lol

“Now you really are the smaller sister,” Zipp said triumphantly, happy to get some payback.

Lol oh that's a good one 🤣

Well this was a pretty funny story and of course zipp should have seen it coming that pipp wanting to show her friends how to use a cell phone which it's pretty interesting to see that and of course zipp figure out to trick her younger sister by using her own social media against our wits that was pretty funny and yeah I did saw the shorts it wasn't that bad of a show a little silly I'm still not fun of the art style but I still think this is not so bad anyway this was pretty good keep up the good work

Funny story with the sisters' antics.

“That’s the perfect spot,” Pipp complimented as she turned the phone’s setting’s to ‘share mode’, “You can see that the light of the sun show’s this handsome stallion’s face and… er… features well and capture the Sheriff of Maretime Bay wonderfully.”

A small blush spread across Hitch’s face. It didn’t help that the others were giggling from the side.

I am a bigger fan of the Hitch x Sunny ship personally.

As someone who has always hated getting my picture taken, I could really relate to Zipp here. And Sisters take flight is the best of the shorts so far, as this image alone demonstrates:

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Dan

"These are small. But the ones out there are far away."

Enjoyed this, and it could very much be canonical. Nice work, author!

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Thank you for your compliment :heart:

This was a pretty funny story.

Well this was amusingly cute. 8/10 great job.

Playful bully Zipp is best big sister. Cute fic for a cute artwork! :moustache:

lol, short n cute:derpytongue2:

just like pipp

Every one of your G5 stories are always treats to read, this fic strengthening that statement! Such adorableness and inspiration from ShadowReindeer's stuff, oh it's a wonderful blend! Hope ya didn't mind, but I just needed to make a reading of this funny lil' fic of yours!

Audio Linky!: https://youtu.be/sJ2h3bbBGFA

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Thank you again as always and happy reading :pinkiehappy:

“So, er, why are we all here again?” Sunny asked her four three friends as they made their way to the gates of the great pegasus city in the mountains.

You should remove three. Having four there makes the sentence sound confusing. :applejackconfused:

“Wow, that’s good to know,” Hitch said, “I can definitely help with business plans in Maretime Bay now that Canter-Logic is being taken down.”

Good. :yay:

It wasn’t difficult for the stallion, who flicked his hair and give a teeth-filled smile at the camera, the sunlight even capturing the shine of his teeth.

mane*

“B.F.Fs!” Izzy replied with a wider smile to match Pipps. The Pipp pressed the camera button and a click could be heard.

The should be removed. Or just change the sentence to say this.

"Pipp pressed the camera button and a click sound could be heard."

“Um, sure?” Hitch walked over to her, “Be warned though. This is my first time using one of these things and it may turn out wonky.

Your missing a "

“Sunny? Mind giving me a hand?” She called over her shoulder. Pipp just stared blankly in the far-off distance, wondering what her sister’s got up her hoof.

hoof* they shouldn't know what hands are. :duck:

Sunny looked down at the device, then back at Zipp. The finally made up her mind and gingerly picked up Pipp’s phone.

Replace the with she

Haha, this what you get, Pipp! :rainbowlaugh:

I don't think this will be the last thing Zipp needs to do to show Pipp that she doesn't care about social media, but that sure was a funny story.

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I listened to your reading!:twilightsmile:
I stopped by to drop a like.

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