Cover art title: Sunny Skating
By artist: AnderDragon76
Sunny is keen to finally have some friends willing to try out her favourite pastime when she has to do her deliveries. After managing to find some extra gear for all of them to try, she's more determined than ever to get her friends into something she enjoys. Will her friends be able to master the art of skating through town and keep up with Sunny?
Thank you to Mystery Pony Fiction for doing a YouTube reading of this story:
Roller-Ponies by Mystery Pony Fiction
Roller skating is definitely harder than it looks and you captured that well here. Also, it's a good thing Sunny remembered to grab helmets for everypony. Safety first after all
That was cute. A fun time between friends and the characters were all spot on. I think I could see a rollerskating episode in the G5 series.
A few errors though:
I think you meant 'fall over'.
'so then'
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Thank you for the tips and happy you liked this story ^^
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Balance was never a speciality of mine
I laughed to hard at that
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Happy to make you smile
Aww that kind of reminds me of Fluttershy when she says that
Well I can actually relate it to Hitch because I don't know how to skate either and that was occasionally I always fall or hit the wall or whatever because I don't know how to break anyway it was really nice to see Sunny to show her friends around town not only that trying out her skates with her friends it looks like everybody starting to get the hang of it well except for hitch when he went down a hill aside from that it looks like everybody was having fun and it's always nice to hang out like that this was a pretty good story keep up the good work
This was a fun read. I'll give it a thumbs up and a favorite.
I used to be able to skate, but I found less and less time for it and eventually forgot...
11175041 Same here, minus the hitting the wall part. I roller skated a little at skating rinks, but I never got into it. I always preferred biking.
This was cute and fun. I enjoyed it nicely
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Thank you for the compliment and happy you liked it
Thanks immensely for sharing this one-shot with us. Definitely liked the work that went into the dialogue and characterizations. I admit that I could never bring myself to try roller skating, but I have a lot of respect for those that do. And, yeah, I could see how most of them could get the hang of skating so quickly (and the only one that didn't is still willing to try again).
I could certainly see this being an actual episode of the future show.
So wholesome. Love it. Great job and congrats on the Feature!
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Thank you so very much ^^ Happy you liked it
Very nice story. To be honest, it almost feels canon.
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That's my aim with most of my stories. Nothing to complicated, but close to what I think the characters are like
Flutters like, :3
Sounds like it's to me Zipp.
Uh huh...
She's likely pinkie pie's long lost sister or cousin she never thought she had.
And he said he wasn't gonna scream, good going hitch.
At least he stopped, even if it wasn't pretty.
And that is why you should never do that, I did something similar like that and ended up fracturing my left arm in the process.
This was a nice short story. I'm not surprised that Izzy is good at rollerskating from the start.
This was a cute, light-hearted story, but poor Hitch's pride
So funny and sweet!
An oddball ghost happened across your fic and read it. Have a review!
one of the sentences had ""now, this is now a unicorn skates." one of those nows should be how, but this was pretty good
Haha, poor Hitch. Not surprised Izzy's a natural, she picks up everything almost instantly. Didn't think wings could aid like that.
As someone who recently started learning to skateboard, I can agree, Sunny. Kept worrying about losing my balance when trying to put my back foot on the board, and I eventually realized I just had to go for it.