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I'm not the greatest writer, but specialising on short and simple stories of cute ponies from MLP:FiM and G5. Just your fan from the UK.

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Artowrk title: Next Generation Of Friends
By artist Grapefruit-Face

It was supposed to be a relaxing day at the beach, but it seems that even the tides of luck weren't in the Mane Five's favour.

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Comments ( 16 )

Personally, I think the title of creepiest invertebrate belongs to the Dobsonfly.
Cute story by the way

Many find compound eyes of bugs creepy. I'm the bug-lover weird sort...

“Whatever you say… Critter Magnet,” Zipp snickered and bumped him on the side.

I love how the fandom (and Hasbro apparently) has collectively decided that StormBlazer is OTP. Or, at the very least, that Zipp is a playful flirt.

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A fun little story! :twilightsmile:

Another lovely and absolutely adorable story!:heart:

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Thank you again ^^

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No problem, your stories are quickly becoming some of my total faves.

Well then that was a pretty funny one and once again they really got them self in the situation they never thought they would and of course hitch Trailblazer really had the attempted to every creature again he has that ability as Fluttershy and that crab is kind of creepy looking but still that was a pretty funny one keep up the good work

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These are like the AppleDash of G5 that why.

Lol, cute story. And yeah, a Conch is a weird animal, actually, Hitch is rather lucky it liked him. But, what else do you expect from the G5 equivalent of Fluttershy? :yay:

This was such a sweet and funny story! :pinkiehappy:

And just one thing, I think I found a few typos:

The girls were now laughing their flanks off from Hitch’s predicament. Zipp, in particular, was rolling around on the sane whilst the others had to wipe tears away from their eyes. By now, Hitch was running up and down the beach, using pieces of driftwood as a lever to pry his new partner off.

I think you mean “rolling around in the sand”

Izzy then took out her phone once again and began taking a video of the sheriff’s antics.

You mean Pipp?

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Thank you and corrected. Glad you liked the story

And that vid went viral.

The only pony not near the group was Izzy. Sunny looked around for her unicorn friend and found her fluffy blue tail sticking out among the rocks. Izzy hopped from rockpool to rockpool, looking down at the pools of water and discovering what was in the pool of water. Smaller crabs scurried for cover when a large shadow landed on them, fish would swim for deeper water, and clams and other shellfish would clamp shut. Izzy would smile, wave at the startled creatures and move on to the next rockpool. This pattern continued until her eyes landed on something washed up onto the sure and caught the light of the hot summer’s sun.

shore not sure.

“Okay, that was creepy,” Sunny shook her head, trying to clear the images from her mind of what she saw in there. Pipp and Zipp looked at each other and had a mental sibling argument with each other about who should be the brave sibling to pick up the shell. Zipp ultimately lost the argument and readied herself as she slowly picked the shell up and both siblings peered inside.

I know the feeling Zipp, the older sibling doing it is no fun. :ajbemused:

He was cut off as the eyes on stalks moved out of the shell and looked towards him, causing the stallion to freeze in shock at how far they extended from the shell.

And you said you weren't afraid of it. :duck:

“Every time a critter lay their eyes on him, he’s a-gonna,” Sunny laughed, “That’s why he’s the local sheriff and critter magnet.”

You mean goner? :unsuresweetie:

Also, I can see why that snail freaked them out, it's terrifying. :twilightoops:

Comment posted by Ebony Gryphon deleted Oct 6th, 2022

Nice story, poor Hitch and lol, scary sea snail.

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