Wanda Young is a human girl adopted by Princess Celestia. She learns to adapt in a world full of ponies, most who embrace the magic of friendship. But as Wanda learns to live with Unicorns, Pegasi and Earth Ponies, she realizes that not all ponies are as friendly and harmonious as she realizes.
Good start, I'll give it a follow.
Monk
“There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
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Thanks. While Chancellor Cinch starts out as being harsh towards Wanda, her heart will start to soften as the story goes on. So she won't be this nasty witch towards Wanda 100%.
Im liking it so far. My only minor nit pick would be. Man's cub. I think it's supposed to be "man cub" At least its man cub in the jungle book.
Just a minor thing, and it is your story, so really its what ever you want it to be.
Im looking forward to more.
The Monk
“Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart
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You're right on that. I checked and it does say Man Cub instead of Man's Cub.
The next arc will start tomorrow.
Another good chapter.
Keep up the great work.
Monk
"Yes, I will eat the Fear Turkey." -Illua
The moment with Baby Spike and Abigail cuddling was cute
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Thanks. It was my idea to pair them more with each other.
On a side note, with the rest of the Mane Six showing up in a future part, expect to see this Spike to meet Rarity.
To the Banks:
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The reaction I was looking for. But down the line, that will look like a complement to Silver and Gold Banks.
Baby Spike is cute in this story
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He's going to stick around for a long, long time.
Is Baby Spike trained or does he wear diapers?
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He wears diapers.
And if you're curious, Abigail is trained.
I hope Wanda is okay or else they might suffer a mother’s wrath
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Oh that Hippogriff will suffer a mother's wrath. Just not one mother.
Is there going to be a chapter for today?
Oops. Forgot all about that. Lemme take care of that.
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You're going to say that again when "Arc 15-8: Protect the Child" goes up.
So Jasmine is Ocellus this whole time?
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Only time will tell.
I hope that the evil bank parent and Twinkle Wish either get put in prison or banished
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Twinkle Wish will most likely get her comeuppance. Just not in a way you believe will happen.
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Believe it or not, I based that kind of part off real life events of some politicians getting away with their own crimes. One example: former Virginia Governor Bob McDonnell
Any plans for a Spike and Abigail side-story?
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In Saga 2, I may consider one.
Incomplete sentence?
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Thanks for the heads up. I fixed it.
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Their will be a sequel to this right?
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There will. It will be called "Trials of Friendship."
A facehoof please.
There it it is.
Again, facehoof please.
Eeyup.
Ditzy Doo in the house!
Facehoof part 3.
Damn!
RD is here!
Twilight is here!
And Spike!
And Starlight! Damn, no Starlight emogi!
Facehoof number 4!
Argh!
Applejack is here!
McDonald's?!?!
Rarity is here!
Fluttershy is here!
Pinkie Pie is here! Let's party!
Octavio Pie? Don't know Pony Life.
THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE LULAMOON is here!
I'm dying here!
Facehoof once more!
The fifth time!