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I really thought that Cadance was going to be futa and both her and Shining would each impregnate one of the twins.
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Considered that but decided to let Shining knock them all up!
I do not know why but I thought the story would be longer.
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I tend to keep my clop short and to the point, although I did leave a few ideas out!
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Understood. I just thought it be an interesting concept for a story. I like one shots but sometimes I see an interesting ideas and see they are short.
Delicious.
Will these maids make a come back in future stories? And other games Shining and Cadance would have for them?
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They appear in many of my OC focused stories, so they'll definitely return! A sequel is always possible!
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I'd love to see a sequel with these 4! See what shenanigans the twins & the Royal Couple will get up to after they give birth!
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Thanks, I'll try to work on one whenever my schedule frees up!
Congrats on the score Sharaz! You deserve every upvote you got!
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Thank you!
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No problem!
Very over-the-top, but sometimes that can be a good thing.
Had a few typos, especially around character names for some reason. Foal_bearer instead of Foal Bearer. And somehow just “H” instead of Cadance?
The characters are also pretty one-dimensional. I realize this piece isn’t intended to be an in-depth character study … but still — a little more work on character could have really improved a story like this.
Still, a pretty good clopfic for what it is. You did a particularly good job making the orgasms especially juicy and raunchy.
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Thanks, I'm guessing the H came from trying to replace a word when I edited? Google docs sometimes misses stuff, probably because I work off an unstable connection.
I almost added more about the twins' backstory but felt it was unnecessary and a little dark for a fluff piece. Shining and Cadance I admittedly didn't have much to say about, although I could have built their relationship lots more.