"Please dont leave"

by Pinkameanie

Update(not a new chapter...yet)

Author's Note:

Long time no see fellow bronies!!!

I'm actually pretty surprised by alot of people, I wrote and posted this story on my phone as an alternative to the loaded handgun I had on my lap as I sat alone on my bed. I've been so alone and depressed my whole life with only one or two people who I thought maybe cared, sunset shimmer is one of the characters of the show that is very dear to me and helped me get through some bad times, and she helped me again when I wrote this story.
So I want to say ive never flamed anyone on fimfiction. I don't care how bad anyone's story is, be RESPECTFUL!!! Dont leave a comment just to tell someone how much you think thier story is garbage. I just wanted to write something heart wrenching, and if Hollywood can make a movie franchise about vampires that sparkle in the sun, then I can write a tragedy with accessive abuse and cruelty of one of my most beloved cartoon characters.

I know this story takes some stuff way too far at points but it's just how I think people would react to finally getting vengeance for YEARS of non stop pain suffering and bullying. I've had alot of flaming from people for the overkill of sunset abuse but I know first hand that just because YOU think you might not act a certain way doesn't mean the people around you or someone you know wouldn't, and there alot of people who jump on the band wagon with them even when they know that what they are doing is wrong.

Also this is NOT a redemption story, if someone treated you bad enough to the point of a suicide attempt, would you really want to go back?

Concerning the 1st or 3rd person fiasco!!! my mind kinda drifts between first and third person and I guess I accidentally wrote this that way so I'm sorry for confusing alot of people if I was a better writer I'd fix all the mistakes but I wrote this at a very dangerous moment in my life and it was enough to make me happy at the time so I won't go back and fix what alot of you have flamed me for, I'll just promise to do my best to keep things straight in the FUTURE CHAPTERS.

That's right this story is not dead!!! And it's only because of all the people who actually liked it and wrote good things to me and actually supported me and this story, I really appreciate the positive feedback and ideas you've given me it makes my days just a little brighter knowing there are people who can't wait to hear something from me, can't say I've ever felt it before but I like it, so those of you who are still interested in the story please continue to give feedback and ideas.
For my fellow bronies I shall continue the story. I'm still not sure when I'll have the next chapter out, but just know it's on its way. And if you read this update please leave a Pinkie pie in the comments so I can see who's still here thank you!!!

Comments

[jollymusician]

[Shooter5000]

[Shooter5000]

Excited to read the next chapter! Love the story.

[Corey]

I know you wanted pinkie but I like Applejack better.

[Toa from Siberia]

Also this is NOT a redemption story, if someone treated you bad enough to the point of a suicide attempt, would you really want to go back?

Now that's what I like to hear. So tired of this forgiveness and taking-the-high-road bullcrap.

[Convex]

yay can’t wait to see Sunset depressed… huh that sounds really bad oh well she can only get better from here

[Kenneth jackson]

[Snowdrifter]

[ThyPrincessOfTheNight]

[bladeblitz]

Im glad the story isnt dead. Im glad you are writing what you want. And above all im glad you are not dead!

[KingSombraTheTyrantRuler]

I say the same as the person before me (bladeblitz).

[dj-pon46]

[Mechanist1138]

[Knightmare2424]

I ^know how _you feel...

[Dark Colt Sabata]

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You and me both, what I hate more than that is the meek Fluttershy-like attitude Sunset always has in these stories.

[Fandom Memester]

Also this is NOT a redemption story, if someone treated you bad enough to the point of a suicide attempt, would you really want to go back?

THIS! I've always hated it how people make a character forgive and forget bullying, especially if they were pushed to this point. I'm all for putting things in the past, but some things can never be forgiven. So I think it's very satisfying when Sunset chooses to not befriend the Rainbooms or students again after being mistreated by them in these stories.

[nighters]

man the irony is that despite sunset being a mean bee in that school for a while she didn't make anyone suicidal just scared them or got them in trouble with teachers probably someone who never truly tried to harm on purpose a bit of blackmail/manipulation and hostage with dog spike but that had to have been a first for her and minions.

[Dr Mysterious Shade]

Honestly you didn't even need to say this much. When it comes to YOUR story, write for your sake and no one else's. If people don't like it, they can go read something else. Anyway glad you're back. 👍

[Apothesis Cannon]

Heya I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to more!

[Hajimebrony]

[Freethinker037]

[A_Cartoon_invader]

[BlazingShogun]

Job well done, my friend!

[Supershadic06]

just glad to hear from you you don't owe us anything i hope u feel much better and may you be blessed not sure if you will see this but if you do thanks

[Snowdrop435]

[Eldorado]

Please don't post status updates or other non-story content as chapters. This is the sort of thing that should be put in a blog - you can tag the blog with the story, so that people following it will be updated.

[Pinkameanie]

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Thank you, I really appreciate your comment, I am doing alot better! I've been wanting to finish this story for awhile now hope you continue to like it and the changes I'm making to it

[Silver Waves]

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[vectorVll]

I will not write any of my criticisms of the story on this because it doesn't seem to be a story to entertain, but more of a way to write out your emotions. But in my opinion, criticism is a way that people see to improve their work and their art. Even bad criticism can be used to improve yourself. Forgiveness is not about the other person. It's for you so you can let go of the hardships. Others or yourself have put on you

[goldenshadowfire]

[TheKing2001]

[John steffens II]

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[darkman]

[Zerocool7785]

[PonyofEntropy]

Hope all is well.

[BlazingShogun]

Preach, my friend! Preach! You’re not alone! Your life matters and does not deserve to be taken away! I’m looking forward and very anxious for the next chapter!

[Phoenix_Flame]

[Sunset_Shimmer7]

[Sunset_Shimmer7]

I look forward to seeing the progression of this story, and I hope you writingthis continues to help you mate

[AxelBlades22]

[Thule]

Update?

[Lord Blightwood]

Hope your still interested in updating this story. Its pretty good. hope all is well.