I'm actually pretty surprised by alot of people, I wrote and posted this story on my phone as an alternative to the loaded handgun I had on my lap as I sat alone on my bed. I've been so alone and depressed my whole life with only one or two people who I thought maybe cared, sunset shimmer is one of the characters of the show that is very dear to me and helped me get through some bad times, and she helped me again when I wrote this story.
So I want to say ive never flamed anyone on fimfiction. I don't care how bad anyone's story is, be RESPECTFUL!!! Dont leave a comment just to tell someone how much you think thier story is garbage. I just wanted to write something heart wrenching, and if Hollywood can make a movie franchise about vampires that sparkle in the sun, then I can write a tragedy with accessive abuse and cruelty of one of my most beloved cartoon characters.
I know this story takes some stuff way too far at points but it's just how I think people would react to finally getting vengeance for YEARS of non stop pain suffering and bullying. I've had alot of flaming from people for the overkill of sunset abuse but I know first hand that just because YOU think you might not act a certain way doesn't mean the people around you or someone you know wouldn't, and there alot of people who jump on the band wagon with them even when they know that what they are doing is wrong.
Also this is NOT a redemption story, if someone treated you bad enough to the point of a suicide attempt, would you really want to go back?
Concerning the 1st or 3rd person fiasco!!! my mind kinda drifts between first and third person and I guess I accidentally wrote this that way so I'm sorry for confusing alot of people if I was a better writer I'd fix all the mistakes but I wrote this at a very dangerous moment in my life and it was enough to make me happy at the time so I won't go back and fix what alot of you have flamed me for, I'll just promise to do my best to keep things straight in the FUTURE CHAPTERS.
That's right this story is not dead!!! And it's only because of all the people who actually liked it and wrote good things to me and actually supported me and this story, I really appreciate the positive feedback and ideas you've given me it makes my days just a little brighter knowing there are people who can't wait to hear something from me, can't say I've ever felt it before but I like it, so those of you who are still interested in the story please continue to give feedback and ideas.
For my fellow bronies I shall continue the story. I'm still not sure when I'll have the next chapter out, but just know it's on its way. And if you read this update please leave a Pinkie pie in the comments so I can see who's still here thank you!!!