"Ah shit!!!"
Rainbow dash had heard the outburst, she looked for the source as she recognized the owner of the voice, as she looked she noticed everyone was too busy looking at there phones to notice the young red head slip away. Rainbow hesitated only a second before she switched to stealth mode and quietly moved to follow the little sister of her now, not so secret lover.
Rainbow was wondering what the girl was up to, especially since she had witnessed sunset and the paramedics, and hadn't jumped for her phone as soon as she heard the ping like everyone else. And because the bell just started ringing to signal the start of class. Rainbow still hadn't looked herself to see what was posted in favor of investigating the strange outburst of the youngest Apple sibling, and knowing Applejacks punishment for skipping class, it had to be important for Applebloom to risk the wrath of her older sister.
Rainbow followed her a few more hallways till they reached the back of the school, to one of the shop classes. There she saw Applebloom stop outside the classroom and make some hand signals to someone inside. Rainbow waited around the corner out of sight as she seen Sweetiebell soon make her appearance out of the classroom. They both quickly made there way back up the hallway towards me, and with no options, I quickly pulled open a wall locker and ducked inside and pulled the door almost closed so I wouldn't be locked in and so it wouldn't make a noise.
Both girls soon passed and didn't turn the corner but kept heading straight down the hall towards the gym, completely not noticing me at all. Having been on every sports team in the school, I knew it would be empty right now and was stumped as to the reason of the obviously secret meeting between the two and wondered where her pseudo sister was and if she had anything to do with this secrecy as well.
I jumped out of the locker when they where far enough away to not bee seen and followed them down the hall. Both girls made it to the gym and went inside, as I reached the doors and looked in I could see the two crusaders dissappear into the girls locker room. I sprinted across the floor hoping they wouldn't hear me coming, and was able to catch the corner of the locker room door before it closed.
As I tried not to make a noise I thanked my years of training and endurance that I didn't need to catch my breath from running full court at top stealth speed, and was able to almost not breath at all as I put all my focus on listening and finding out what these two where up to.
As she focused her hearing she heard the unmistakable sound of someone getting slapped and almost pulled open the door and give herself away, but before she could she heard Applebloom apologizing and footsteps, and Rainbow stopped when she heard Sweetie ask why she'd been slapped, wondering myself I listened in.
As they're conversation progressed, I was progressively losing parts of my sanity! Anonamiss wasn't Sunset? It had been Applebloom and Sweetie the WHOLE TIME!!!? When they got to the part about blackmailing scootaloo, I could feel myself shaking with rage, these two thought they where so smart huh? They think there going to get away with this? Not a chance!!!
Rainbow could tell the conversation was just about over, so she pulled out her phone and cracked open the door just enough to take a picture of the two in there secret meeting, once that was done she made her way out of the gym before she was caught. If those two knew she was on to them, they would have plenty of time to come up with plaubibal-plaugible-plaus......... Good excuses to get themselves out of trouble before she could prove there guilt.
Rainbow made her way through the school, back to the front of the building where the faculty rooms and principal offices where. As she walked it really started to hit home just how wrong she was, everything she'd done to Sunset up until now, she definitely didn't deserve that punch to the face! Sunset really wasn't anonamiss!!!. And as she thought more on it, the more she felt like shit. Some element of loyalty she was, she needed to tell Applejack what she'd found, but first the information was going to the only person Rainbow knew would always do the right thing!
She approached one of the door's (she could hear voices on the other side but couldn't tell what they where saying!) and firmly knocked three times. She heard the voices falter and go quiet before she heard the voice of the woman she wanted to speak with call from inside "you may enter!"
As Rainbow opened the door and stepped inside, she gave the office a once over and noticed the other occupants of the room. Microchips from the tech club, (she was pretty sure thats what his name was?) Then there was Cheerilee, don't let her name fool you, that lady can bee a real slave driver when she wants to be.
And there sitting behind her desk was the woman she'd came to see.
Rainbow closed the door and stepped forward, she looked principle Luna in the eyes as she brought her phone out of her pocket and held it up.
"Vise principle Luna, there's something you need to know!!!"
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Rarity was walking down the hallway next to Fluttershy, as the two neared there class they where stopped when two students in front of them busted out in a fight as they almost bowled the two girls over in there attempt to beat each other. As other students and clearly friends of the two brawlers pulled them apart before any serious damage could be done, Rarity dusted herself off where those two brutes had almost touched her.
Rarity quickly checked over Fluttershy to make sure she was fine as well before making her frustration clear. "What in heavens name was that all about?" She asked aloud as she looked around the hall at the other students who where still there.
One student stepped forward and spoke as the others moved on. Lighning Dust didn't look happy as she spoke, "they where fighting because Hoops thought Score was anonamiss and accused him of posting his secrets!"
Rarity and Fluttershy both looked at the athletic girl as if she'd grown a third eye, finally Rarity found her voice again and asked, "what are you talking about darling, Sunsets anonamiss, everyone knows this?"
Lightning had a really surprised look when Rarity said that and voiced her disbelief.
"You mean you haven't heard yet? Sunset was wheeled out of the school by paramedics covered in blood, and anonamiss posted when the paramedics where loading her into the ambulance! Sunsets not anonamiss"
Fluttershy and Rarity stood there frozen for a moment, before Lightning, having become bored with the conversation made her exit while the two girls where clearly overwhelmed into a state of silence. As the realization sunk in for the two, tears started to fall from there eyes as an unknown force started to pull at them somehow making them feel suddenly heavier. As they stood there still motionless in the hallway it was Fluttershy who said aloud what they both where thinking.
"What have we done?"
They were still silently standing there when the announcement speakers in the hall crackled to life with static and the voice of Vice principle Luna spoke, "Attention, all students and staff are to make there way too the gymnasium for an emergency school assembly, everyone is advised to make there way to the gym immediately, teachers bring your attendance sheets and do rollcall as soon as your class is seated in the gym, I will collect attendance sheets personally"
Having some idea now, as to what the assembly was about Fluttershy and Rarity slowly made there way down the hall to meet with there class.
That unknown force, the one that makes you think that suddenly the planet decided to put all gravity on you, that made you understand that you and almost the entire school were the true demons, that force, is the fucking fault and I hope it never leaves you or you or the rest of the school.
Why does the synopsis only have one period in it?
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I had wrote the synopsis before I wrote the story and kinda rushed it to start writing before I could forget my ideas. I will fix this!
This. I love Luna coming in clutch and dispensing justice. This is why she is best princess/principal.
Whoa, talk about a roller coaster of emotions!
Honestly, I don't mind the whole Overused Anon-A-Miss stuff that much. However, I will say that this story feels rushed past the Sunset focused chapters. Besides that and minor spelling mistakes, this story isn't half bad. Sure, the plot seems to be going full speed ahead. But it also does have some nice moments of dialog and interaction. (Pinkie coming in just in time to help, and Sunset's overall greyness and sorrowful spiral into depression). That being said, there are at many times where characters feel rickety, OOC. The fact that most of if not the entire school was celebrating Sunset's suicide attempt truly felt wrong on a plethora of levels. Especially the CMC. Well, the two that are running Anon-A-Miss that is...
Still, this story does have potential. I will say that. And in the end, it's the authors choice on what happens. I wish you luck in the continuation of this story Pinkameanie!
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Honestly given the way things were and how wishy-washy the school is even in canon it isn't that much of a stretch that many would start celebrating. The teachers though is a bit odder, but ehh.
Just FYI, in Rainbow Dash's section, there's a "They're" that should be "there"... And half of it is in 3rd person while the other half is in 1st person perspective.
Fine read so far. Good job.
During or after the assembly, the Humane 5 (with or without Pinkie) should get a "The Reason You Suck" Speech'' for basically painting a target on Sunset by publicly accusing her in the hallway.
Maybe a question being raised why the student body as a whole belivede that Sunset was guilty, and their reason being...
''Because Sunset's friends said that she is!''
And then we have Applejack... who have now become an ''Asshole Victim''.
Learning that it's because of her own kin that will be the reason that she will be disowned from her precious family.
And that she was THE last straw that broke Sunset, when she said that with Sunset merely being alive was an insult.
PS: Will it not be interesting to see how Applebloom will react to learning that because of that post, she will lose her sister. And figuring out that because of that post she would lose her sister, no matter whether or not she was found out to be Anon-a-Miss.
You seemed to have typed “there” when you probably meant to type “their” on multiple occasions.
11117181 Homonym seems to be a recurring problem here. Case in point, the title of chapter 4.
Edgy
Interesting story. Added to my read list.
I'll be following the story. I'm curious to see the direction it will take from then on, and well, I just hope everyone get their just desserts ^^ A good revenge story kinda feels good after a long day at work !
However, I noticed the story sometimes shifts from the 1rst to the 3rd person mid text (From Rainbow to I, for instance), which makes it a bit strange in my opinion. I'd recommend keeping the person consistent, with maybe Italic text to differentiate characters' thoughts from narration ^^
i like this story keep it up!
Yeah ah shit indeed dumb idiot you dun goofed
And applejack you idiot,YOU SAID WORDS THAT SHOULD NEVER HAVE BEEN SAID TO ANYONE! especially if its for stupid reason as a few online post and a flimsy evidence you guys have!?🤬 Also you rainboom Dumbasses "ITS THE 21st CENTURY PEOPLE THERE IS SUCH THING AS HACKING!?"
Anyway thank you for the chapter I can't wait to see this idiots suffer for their idiocy
yeah what did you do some friends you are.
for some reason that line reminds me of when I was bullied and I too almost with the route that Shimmer took but I remembered one thing that kept me going. "Bullies that say that are your friends is a lie."
I do enjoy this story btw
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People always forget about hacking in Anon-A-Miss stories.
I kinda wonder if it’s not a thing in these stories?
Everyone should suffer for their idiocy
Now is coming assembly, and i hope karma strikes everyone
hope the next chapter(s) come out soooon, please and thank you!
Tell me I'm not the only one who pictured her crouch down like they do in videogames to stealth
Hope there’s an update soon.
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Now that the police are involved, the BoE will get involved as well. I'm thinking a few teaching careers ending. Assault investigations, a principal getting demoted if not temporarily suspended and a few expulsions.
All the Rainbooms (minus Pinkie) can suck it.
Also props to Scootaloo for being the sensible one. She should be the one to blow the whistle on the other two. Or at the very least verify that the other two are indeed responsible.
Just checking in. Hope all is well with you.
Whoa it all went down real hard! Can't wait to see what happened next!
This is interesting!
Dude, what you wrote is a Sunset abuse fic. Everyone is outrageously out-of-character, Sunset is getting hurt beyond imagination, and worse of all, trying to redeem the characters or merely make amends with Sunset will be completely useless. The part where you had everyone cheer for her suicide attempt just proves that she means absolutely nothing to them. And it's absolutely disgusting. I'm sorry for saying this, man, but it's true. The only plausible ending you can have is everyone getting their karma and Sunset returning to Equestria, living a peaceful life.
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That's what I was thinking. I really hope that happens.
Guessing also the Tragedy Tag is for the same reason, right?
Don't listen to unhappy people, just do what you like, when is the next??😃😃 I've been wanting to know for 1 years!😅 No pressure of course!
Hope you return to this story sometime soon please and continue it.
Another great Story that will NEVER BE FINISHED!!