I'm not the greatest writer, but specialising on short and simple stories of cute ponies from MLP:FiM and G5. Just your fan from the UK.
Inspired by the fanart Big Horseshoes to Fill
By SilFoe
Cadance is bored, being stuck in the castle one afternoon with nothing to do. Seeing her auntie's closet where all her regalia is, she decides to see if she has what it takes to be a proper princess of Equestria. The problem is, she has some big horseshoes to fill.
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I liked this, really nice and comfy slice of life, and I have spot for Celestia-Cadence stories too, so it clicked.
But it had a few grammatical errors, especially regarding sudden tense changes, that was a bit jarring. Giving it another round of proofreading should fix those. Still, I gave you an upvote as a sign of goodwill, because overall it was a cute story.
maybe you can make another story based on this image:
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Thank you for the feedback and view. I'm trying to improve with grammar check apps like Grammarly ^^
Wishing you a happy Christmas
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Maybe so...
Dry
This is wonderful!
This is very adorable. No wonder Cadance turned out to be a great foalsitter when she had Celestia taking care of her. It was also nice seeing Philomena here.
Very cute work, Quote. Not nearly enough Cadance stories.
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An upgrade from your typical 'hmmm', but still lacking in what it brings to the table. 2/10.
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Thank you. As they say baby steps
This was adorable. :D
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Thank you so very much ^^
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Oh that second part wasn't aimed at you
Short sweet and rather cute
So cute!