Hello, my name is Lillian Rose and I'm a human. Well I was human and my name wasn't Lillian before but as of now, I go by Lillian because it seems life likes to screw with me every chance it gets especially now that I'm trapped in the body of my oc for one of my favorite franchise along with being stuck in a world of magical talking ponies. I just hope life doesn't start screwing with me here too, oh hey look, Dr. Eggman's here. WAIT WHAT? OH COME ON!
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Hope you guys like this story this idea came to me while I was working on a comic I just hope this story comes out as funny as I originally thought and remember no hate comment if you don't like this story just put a dislike but for those who do like this story tell me what you think.
This story will cover season 1
MLP belongs to Hasbro
Sonic belongs to Sega
Nyx belongs to Pen Stroke
OCs belong to me (Not counting Aphmau and friends since I originally did not create them)
Lillian and Jeff belong to Scorch234
Bluu the Diamond Dog belongs to AstralFlare42
The chakat species belongs to Goldfur
Fairy Tail belongs to Hiro Mashima
Brand New Animal belongs to Studio Trigger
Cardcaptors belongs to CLAMP
Warrior Cats belong to Erin Hunter
Cat Returns belongs to Studio Ghibli
Holo and Myuri belong to Isuna Hasekura
Minecraft belongs to Mojang
Lion Guard and Bambi belong to Disney
Please, please look into run-on sentences and how to avoid them.
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Thanks I'll try to fix that and make sure it doesn't happen in the next chapter
The story is good but what he said.
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Thanks
Sir, you are in desperate need of a proofreader.
Or to learn how to English, I understand if it isn't your primary language but if it is... yikes.
How did you do that pic?
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Sorry I try the best I could so sorry if there’s any mistakes in the story
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I pulled out my switch turned on sonic forces made my character do a pose than took the picture with my phone
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Tried to do it that way but it's just sideways.
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Well usually when that happens I turned my sideways to get a straight image or try it again straight up to get a better image and it usually works
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nice story cant wait to see more chapters soon
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Thanks glad to hear you like this story so far I'm working on the third chapter right now
Does your Sonic OC fight using punches?
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Yes but if they can't defeat a enemy they know they can't defeat with their usual fighting style they'll use whatever they can toy try to defeat they enemy they're facing
I cringed reading this
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I thank you for your honesty but I am trying my best not all of us are great writers but like I said I am trying my best
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It's pretty good in my opinion and at least it has good grammar not the best but still good and it's much better than what I can do alone
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Thanks
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Good thing I chose to help out since I got keen eyes and the experience
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Yup and again thanks
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Yeesh... Guess folks don't seem to like the story that well...
Eh it was already like that anyways but hey what matters is I try my best no matter what
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It's not as cringy as it used to be
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I guess your right on that since I have you as an editor now
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Eyup! I'm good with finding mistakes
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Mhm
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You busy?
My PM messages aren’t going through!
Oh
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It’s weird.... but are you bringing in a new OC for this story?
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No why
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As it is now, there’s two Mobian OCs.... both female... And what if one was in heat? She wouldn’t be able to breed with a stallion though....
If a male was included, it would be easier for the two females
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But hey, it’s just an idea for now
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This story doesn't have a sex tag so no sorry
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Not everyone is comfortable with that area....
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Actually I'm not good at writing sex scenes that's why
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They can be skipped over then. That way, we can keep that sort of crap out of the story
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Oh
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Yeah
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K
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Yeah
Not again....
The absolute balls someone must have to Rick roll Celestia I applaud and I shall play it at their funeral
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That's my Co author and editor who wrote that part
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Hehe, that was my doing!
Danyelle's reaction to the baked bads -
The centaur shaped feline? I know a lot of things about the sonic universe thanks to games and my knowledge of comics is limited. but this creature is your creation?
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Blizzardstar is one of my OCs that I created but the species was created by another person
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she seems to know how to use warp rings