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Wolokai


"The road ahead is not easy, but neither is it impossible to travel. Run, Twilight Sparkle. Run."- Wolokai KuRR

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(Rainbow Vs. Wild ---> Octavia Vs. Rave ---> Shyness Vs. Kindness ---> Twilight Vs. The Great and Powerful
---> Generosity Vs. Laughter.)


Rarity and Pinkie Pie are too busy for love, everypony knows that! Rarity has her dress business, and Pinkie has her parties. But what happens when the two mares are offered a chance to throw one of the biggest and most important party's ever: Big Macintosh and Fluttershy's WEDDING!

Can Rarity handle the hyper behavior and randomness of the ecstatic Pink Party Pony she's sure to encounter, long enough to design and plan the perfect day for her timid friend? Can she handle the stress of such a massive task with such little time? Will she be able to get through to Pinkie Pie to make her understand that this isn't just 'some party?"

For Rarity, yes, it's no problem! She'll be able to do this, no sweat!

There's just one problem...something's happened to Pinkie Pie. Nopony knows what, and nopony knows why. Well, nopony except the Cake's, and they've been sworn by the formidable power of the Pinkie Promise not to tell!!!

The task falls upon Rarity to save Pinkie Pie from her depressing behavior, and to discover the truth of what has happened to the poor mare, and perhaps discover a few things about herself that she never would have thought existed!

To take a chance, to save a pony, to plan the most bad-ass party in Equestrian History,
and to take a Leap of Faith!!!

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 222 )

great intro freaking 5 stars on that and im already in love with it

I once debated whether I should read or not read The Vs. Series (Is there a specific name for it.) But now that this is here, I guess I have to read 'em all.

:derpytongue2: 5 stars, don't even have to start reading

Ooooh, buck, Pinkie is sick. When I read the very first bit, the sort of prequel paragraphs, I thought "Pinkie...pregnant? I hope not..."

But you've dropped enough hints. Pinkie is not in a good place.

hmm I didn't read the other parts of the leap of fate series but I'll give this one a try. On to the "To read" pile with this. Love the pairing. :twilightsmile:

oh noes pinkie pie is sad pinkie whats wrong why are you sad :pinkiesad2: when pinkie gets sad i get sad we must help pinkie feel better

goo

186174 Maybe because the grammar is terrible? I love the plot, but I don't think it deserves such a high rating. Perhaps invest in a pre-reader or editor or something?

187589

It'll pick up don't worry. The chapters in this fic will be small in number but long in size if I can do this right.

The intro was meant to be short, sort of a "hook" if you know what I mean.

187705

Yeah, I can dig it. Like my story started out with about 4000 word chapters, and I'm going to have one that's over 10,000 in a bit.

Also, what's wrong with Pinkie? Is she pregnant, or...

188803 My guess is she's dealing with her mental problems what with the straight hair and all.

187705 Heh, and a hook it is, though with me I've been hooked to your stories for some time now (:

Wonderful start, Lot's of people have played the mental Pinkie, but I haven't read a story that has her seeing anyone about it before. It's always that she breaks somewhere in the story and then goes all nuts on ponies. This is going to be a good read indeed.

Have a good one. :D

Just a slight update, the chapter's may not come out as frequent as the previous. I'm using this time to take care of personal things and work on my writing for the upcoming stories I've got lined up for you all. Every chapter I'm going to try to at least get 4,500 words + if I can. Although I'm not sure how much I can put into this story...I didn't really have high hopes or an idea for an extensive plot in this story...

I will do my best though! You've all stuck with me so far so I'm thankful for all your advice, praise, and criticism! And thanks for the comments about the self-insertion...because there's a reason it was there :pinkiecrazy:

I'll try not to let you down, but if I do I deserve to be beaten with a giant stick for letting down some of the most amazing group of people ever :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Now onto the story dammit :yay:

192334 Daaaaw...:fluttercry::fluttercry: no, YOU are amazing!!!!!:pinkiehappy:


(no kidding, you made this chapter so good i read it 3 times :pinkiecrazy:)

Buck yes! Late night reading FTW! Very good as always, muh man. Keep it up!

Great work once Again. Can't wait to see how you write the rest of the story.

Fluttershy's outfit! SO CUTE!

A sweet chapter (: It read nice and smoothly, wasn't too fast or too slow, it was a nice even pace.

Have a good one :D

Aaaw so cute!
keep up the good work and i cant wait for the next chapter! (wants to know whats up with pinkie pie):fluttercry:

Aw crap, need my insulin. Hng.

Nicely done, as always sir. Keep up the good work.

ALRIGHT BIG MAC :eeyup: damn man your the only one i'd trust to take care of fluttershy :fluttercry: so you take good care of her you hear me or there will be hell to pay .

You're giving me chest pains and heart palpitations. Stop writing such adorable things.
Ignore that, don't do anything I just said. I could die reading this and it would be in the middle of a squeal of joy.

fluttershy is best pony
...
...
that is all
kthanxbai

Oh my goodness I think my heart is beating. What is this madness?

that was a beautiful chapter!! i have only ONE complaint... i was waiting to see Pinkie Pie!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

please!! a full chapter only about her is being requested!!!!!!!!!:fluttershysad::unsuresweetie:

I do love this series, and however this specific story has yet to prove itself as fantastic as the others... I'm sure you'll be able to pull it off! happy writing! :pinkiehappy:

*Your page says this has three chapters, refreshes untill I realise its a error* :raritydespair:

We keep going farther back in time in this crazy story, and Doctor Whooves isn't even involved. Head is still spinning from all the time jumps......:derpyderp2: Great story........:pinkiehappy: My mind just gets lost in time all the time that time jumps in stories just make the darn thing worse. But keep up the good work. I will just deal with these mind pains... somehow.....:pinkiesick:

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