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ThePinkedWonder


Someday, I'll stop writing silly comedy stories. However, today isn't "someday".

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While being chased by a hydra, Twilight Sparkle tried to jump across a chasm to safety like her friends did, but came up short. She found herself falling and screaming to her death.

However, right before she could become the late Twilight Sparkle, Spike reminded her that she could teleport to save herself. She didn't have to be reminded twice.

Unfortunately, teleporting not only kept her in danger, but also put her friends back in danger! Although Twilight did not expect how things would end...

Warning: contains some meta-humor and self-awareness and not just by Pinkie Pie.

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“Wasn’t talking about him.” Moisty leaned his head to point at Princess Celestia. “I was talking about her .”

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Celestia sighed. “I didn’t even get to sing the song I wrote for this moment.”

Damn it. I loved that song from Season 3. The one thing Celestia is actually good at. Singing.

My brain cells are dead now…but still LOL

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I thought about adding that cilp in the story itself after Twilight got roasted. It was worse during the early parts of editing.:rainbowlaugh:



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Jokes aside, I really don't think Celestia is really clueless but caught in a no-mare's land where if she did beat villains, Twilight and the mane 6 would have no one to fire friendship lasers at. I just might have fun with that someday.

And yeah, Celestia is a great singer. She's a boss when it comes to that.




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Thanks!

And the part where the mane six, Spike and Celestia got stuck in the mud made me chuckle, I was like "Um, Twilight, Celestia, you guys do know that you two can teleport yourselves and your friends out of the mud with your magic right?"

Yeah, and Applejack didn't let Twi and Celestia forget how they forgot about their magic either:rainbowlaugh:





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...Does anyone know brain cell CPR? Can it even be done? Where's Pinkie?!

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I am a zombie now…I am fine! Lol

But seriously. This is AMAZING.
*tosses upvote* take it! Take may upvote!

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"It's okay, they're fine. Tell Pinkie she doesn't have to do a fourth wall break and save them! And tell Fluttershy it's not her fault so she'll stop crying, or she's going to make me cry! And PLEASE make sure Twilight doesn't try any spells to 'fix' anything!"

In all seriousness, I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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Maybe you should go back and put the clip in there.

“I hope our fan base wasn’t too attached to Twilight as a unicorn, or we just lost half of it,” Spike said.

Oh... um, I also have a confession to make. I’m one of those fans that are still into unicorn Twilight. :twilightoops:

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Oh... um, I also have a confession to make. I’m one of those fans that are still into unicorn Twilight. :twilightoops:

Fluttershy (in this story) would be happy. Despite that, you didn't leave! Or at least didn't stay gone forever.

I, on the other hoof, never understood the hate regarding Alicorn Twilight.

Granted, I only got into the fandom about 3 to 4 years before it ended...

Sniff sniff

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I get some of the hate and the reason for it, but sometimes to me, it's a bit overblown.

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Could you please explain the reason(s) behind such hate for a wonderful and smart mare?

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From what I've seen and heard from other fans, these are it:

1: Not liking that it might make her more "special".
2: Not liking that she started going on to spread friendship, or in some fans' eyes, "forcing friendship on them".
3: She became worse as an alicorn due to episodes like "No Second Prances" or "Marks for Effort". I definitely don't agree with this one on the ground that just about every character made fans mad at them at least once or twice.
4: They didn't like how she just "went with it" after becoming an alicorn and Celestia said she was a princess. This one is more Celestia hate than Twicorn hate.
5: It was too big a change, in the eyes of some fans, and some even thought it ruined the show. Fans don't like big changes in general, even if it turned out to not be that big a change.
6: This one's outdated now, but apparently there was fear that being an alicorn would make Twilight a Mary Sue.
7: A combination of two or more of the above.

Why do fans feel like any of those ways? You'll have to ask them, since they feel must more strongly about it than I do, so what's not a big deal to me might mean a ton to them.

“It’s okay, and I’m sorry for keeping a secret of my own. The Pie family are descendants of Discord, and that’s why I can use Pinkie Sense. The writers won’t let me use my chaotic magic unless it’s for laughs, or I would use it to save us.”

I always suspected

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