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dang. this got a little to dark dude.
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I know, it's meant to be a sad and dark chapter.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
that's sad mate so sad
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It's meant to be sad.
ok. this is sweet enough to give eyes cavities.
This was a nice little story.
You really should put a suicide tag on this, though.
Why is it that in largely every Sunset story I read. Sunset talks about how its her fault? When confronted with Celestia?
Dawwww
Is this a completed story
Love princess momlestia so damn much great job
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Yes.
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Because people are unoriginal in that regard.
im sorry but im not reading the sad version for what its worth i enjoyed the story
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At some level, Sunset, the author, and the many of the readers accept the premise that Celestia is good and perfect, and that Sunset was evil. The source material is a kid's show with simple morality after all, so this is an easy conclusion to jump to. But if you want to explore that further...
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I wrote Sunset in this story to show how far Anon A Miss broke her.
After Anon-A-Miss caused her to fall into a depression she began to hate herself and would cut herself to try and end her life as painfully and slowly as possible. The reason? She believes she deserves to die because she brought magic unfairly to the human world, became a bully, became a demon and tried to take over her homeworld.
In those crimes or so she believes, she thinks that Celestia hates her and would want her to be dead.
I wrote a sad and dark suicide chapter to show how far Sunset truly wanted to go after the Fall Formal and Anon-A-Miss,
This is a really interesting tale so far.
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Same I always wonder why?
When Celestia partly to blame too.
One thing, I loved this so much. I love Princess Momlestia being bio or adoptive mom to Sunset, just one weird thing, why is Luna a tag? She was in like 1 sentence in the story.
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wow! Great breakdown. Im going to write this down.
I like this ending a lot better. I love Hurt/Comfort stories manily. The Sad ending was pretty good too. Overall I liked the story here have a stache.
This is inspired by an incomplete story by RedandReady45 "What happened to Sunset's family" right?
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Yes.
How did you know?
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I also stumbled onto the story. The structure of chapter 1 feels extremely similar. Not that I'm complaining, you're making something original with it at least
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Would you...ever maybe do an audio reading of this story?
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Your this story or redandready's one?
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Mine.
Those bitches deserve it.
This chapter is the most wholesome yet.
This is pretty good and I like it. I highly enjoyed the fiction.
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Thank you! It means a lot!
I wrote this story only because I couldn't get the idea for it out of my head.
It was bugging me for weeks.
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Because she likely feels that, if she hadn't been so mean and such back then, things would have been better