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Sexy I loved it!
One question and this can be difficult, but will there be a chance to see another chapter of Corruption of Equestria?
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This paragraphy sticks to me as being too long-winded for the heat of the moment. Something shorter, like "Changelings can feel each others' presence. If you were a changeling, you'd know that" would flow better, I feel.
"We art sure that would be a very short lived amusement."
Also, you should probably pick one form of the word for Luna - "are" or "art" - and stick to it.
Otherwise, pretty good.
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Now I need more
Nice time for Changelings and fine lore for a one shot
speech 100
doesn't sit quite right with me, i think it should be
"don't matter how she moves my behind up to the moon."
It’s kind of weird how the prose of this story often has such a detached, formal, didactic tone to it. Even much of the dialog. A lot of the way things are worded here belongs in a professor’s lecture, not in a clopfic about strippers.
That said, it’s still a very good clopfic about strippers! I really enjoyed how you gave them a variety of body types and how you made even smaller breasts so sexy. The short scene with Rainbow Dash really makes me want to see a sequel featuring a private dance with her. Not big on all the wing play, personally, but I guess some people are into that? Oh, and I love how you still kept Cara’s interest in Luna’s body and breasts, even after things really got going. Far too many authors seem to forget about all of that once the sex starts.
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I admit I am in love with smaller breasts. Obviously though, I do love larger one's as well, even while I tend to love cute and smol more.
And while I am a horndog, I certainly can be quite the formal guy, leading to my style of writing. 
Wingplay is something that can be fun. The allure is simply, I would say, to have some more erogenous zones to play with. To drive a character wild. It is something that I first read about many years ago in Ingress: Vacation. A very good slowly building up arousing story that I can recommend. Who knows? Maybe it will turn you into a wing lover? 
Anyway, I love to hear that you enjoyed the story!
And it is indeed easy to forget certain things in the heat of the moment. I do try to keep all things in mind and am glad it worked out well in this story. Hopefully it will for my future stories as well. 