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PegPony
I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.
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The story is "fine". The only criticism I have, is not having Twilight make a huge ass apology for almost declaring war like that.
She is supposed to be the princess of "friendship", and she has the audacity to make this f**** up claim!? And even after everything, she didn't even apologize to everybody here!?
Still don't get get why people are so hard on this story and the previous one in the series.
I do agree with the other comment about how Twilight should be more apologetic about her previous actions, but I think it could easily be part of an extra paragraph in the epilogue, which currently feels a smidge sparse. If Celestia and Luna are allowed to interact between their harems, maybe Twilight can have her own relationships with Cadance, Rarity, and/or Applejack.
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That's a fair point! I suppose I could have made her more apologetic, though if someone decided to marry me and allow their entire country to be governed by my country's laws and didn't kick up a fuss, I'd probably be OK with it if they didn't think to apologize! Thanks for your feedback :)
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Some people may not like the stories, other people may just not like me, or a combination of both. I don't let it worry me too much.