The story is "fine". The only criticism I have, is not having Twilight make a huge ass apology for almost declaring war like that.
She is supposed to be the princess of "friendship", and she has the audacity to make this f**** up claim!? And even after everything, she didn't even apologize to everybody here!?
11583289 That's a fair point! I suppose I could have made her more apologetic, though if someone decided to marry me and allow their entire country to be governed by my country's laws and didn't kick up a fuss, I'd probably be OK with it if they didn't think to apologize! Thanks for your feedback :)
The story is "fine". The only criticism I have, is not having Twilight make a huge ass apology for almost declaring war like that.
She is supposed to be the princess of "friendship", and she has the audacity to make this f**** up claim!? And even after everything, she didn't even apologize to everybody here!?
11583289
That's a fair point! I suppose I could have made her more apologetic, though if someone decided to marry me and allow their entire country to be governed by my country's laws and didn't kick up a fuss, I'd probably be OK with it if they didn't think to apologize! Thanks for your feedback :)