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SpyPony


Someone who wants to write from the heart.

Comments ( 7 )

I'd love for there to be more of this. This is quite an underrated story!

Maybe there could be a potential sequel that details the gradual changes and improvements Chrysalis and Chryssy's Hive brings, over the course of weeks, or months of her rule? I'd love to see how in each chapter, these changes continue to make life in Equestria more streamlined, and it causes even the ponies outside Canterlot to appreciate the quality of life changes they hadn't realized they sorely needed.
Of course, seeing her later on confront and then break in the other Princesses, as well as the Mane 6, would be excellent to see in the sequel too. :rainbowwild:

Either way, I hope this provides some good motivation for your future works! :twilightsmile:

That was a pretty good story and I'm hoping for a sequel!

It was just beautiful!
I love this turn of events.

well this is a good story start.

That was super hot. This is such a good story

I wouldn't mind seeing some bonus chapters of Chryssy getting twilight sparkle and her friends, cadance and shining armor.

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Thank you! Actually yeah, I just read over this story again, and I do believe that that's what I'll do!

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