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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
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RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!!!
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*imagines all the jiggling*
Then they all got Coronavirus.
10208425
What a twist!
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
And make sure to allow notifications from the contest group and/or follow Dirty Little Secret to get the full results and the awards show post on June 9th!
------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Surprisingly intense for such a short fic.
-Cringeworthy wording at times:
gelatinous orbsslimy clams-A few grammar problems:
letting her own even more ample milkjugs wobbled free.the night time streets-- one wordDoing this in public before an audience, being filmed, having sex with a girl she barely knew; it all combined to make her loins heat up and her body tingled all over.-- improper use of semicolon- Nicely casual and free-loving.
- Seems kid of superficial and emotionless.
- It’s cute how Pinkie just doesn’t care about consent at all.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 80/100
Allure: 69/100
Enticement: 80/100
Immersion: 90/100
Prose Quality: 80/100
Total Score: 399/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
10240385
Thank you for the review! It honestly did better than expected.
Well, that was pretty wild
Some of the more...descriptive choices of words I've seen in some time
10250093
Thank you, trying to repeat my descriptions less with each fic which sometimes leads to 'cringy' phrasing!