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So far this is a very good read, immersive, and well-written. I'm glad it's a lamia. Somehow the mayor knew it was a lamia and she only saw its face.

Huh. That was a lot tamer than I expected.

7691075 As long as it's fatal and their fate is sealed it'll get my rocks off. Not sure what all to expect, but soft vore is my favorite. :twilightsmile:

This feels so real and the characters are so natural :heart:

Cheerilee survived that encounter? Honestly didn't see that one coming.

First......*leaves quietly* :trixieshiftleft:

This is an amazingly well written story with some of the most realistic dialogue I've seen. The rock throwing was a great way to start things off. I'm mostly disturbed why this story doesn't have more attention.

As of now we here at Radio Vinyl are live for out Dead by Dawn marathon.

our*

The next chapter will contain sex and vore.

Finally.

8198956 I know right?

Also: I best fix that.

Well, considering you're back, I can forgive the lack of murder... this time...

you get used to murdering your characters eventually. I'm glad you discovered how fun it can be. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Whooof, that was intense. Well you certainly got me at the edge of my seat and now waitibg for the next update

Well that was remarkably short. Interesting tidbit all the same. Looking forward to more.

Val had started hunting a few hours ago and would have surly snagged at least one of them by now.

surely*

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Looking at the word counts on some of the chapters, it does occur to me I could stitch together several of them. But then I couldn't leave readers hanging on dramatic scene endings.

Oops:twilightsheepish: Fixed.

Ah, title drop... in the chapter title whatever it counts!

Though the short chapters are a bit frustrating. You could easily have strung this one and the last one together into one. This was barely a scene.

Also:

Ember seemed to be busying herself going over that stacks of food they had,

I think you meant what* here.

Sidenote: seeing one of my own stories in the "Also liked" section for one of my favorite stories is kinda surreal.

I'm betting on him being still alive. Also, I wonder if Cheerilee will try to run or find Val

~20000 words in...

...where's the diaper fetish stuff you promised?

Someone should write a whole story about that.

Dang it I'm already working on a different kink request, don't tempt me with my absolute favorite one now.

Nice chapter, and an interesting twist. Are you going the route of The Vore House of Klyneth?
I'm guessing Bright's just in a sort of chemically induced euphoric trance?

The Vore House of Klyneth

What's this? Lamia vore art I haven't heard of? I'm off my game.
And unfortunately (or fortunately depending on your kink), the story won't quite be taking that route. Or maybe it will. Who knows!
For real reals, I am working on something oddly similar to VHoK (hence the ever so subtle Author's Note), but I need to finish this story first.
And Bright is basically tripping balls inside Val. Lack of oxygen mixed with chemicals in Val's body or something.

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Someone added this fic to that group. I only took inspiration for the name of the fic.

But, since you made it this far, what do you think?

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Dance shows? I've been in a theater class while they discussed dance routines for a thing. Good luck, brother and/or sister.

And the story can function without the vore scenes. Been meaning to make a handy dandy avoid the creepy sex stuff guide for such a reason.

will this story be updated?

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As of right now, unlikely. Maybe after I can set up a subscribestar or something to help motivate me more.

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