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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
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I like this story
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Thank you!
Tie between all of them. <3
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Always a good choice!
I'm biased in my choice of Fluttershy. It is a tossup between her, Rarity, and Twilights. Although in the final description it doesn't say anything about Pinkies own pussy.
Also surprised that there wasn't more of a debate for who had the better pussy.
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All great choices! As for Pinkie's, I imagine it's as pink as the rest of her!
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To be honest I half expected Pinkies to shoot out confetti either when she first opened her pussy with the speculum or when she came.
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That would have been a riot!
I’m tied between Pinkie and Rainbow. Twilight’s a close second, and Rarity’s not far behind.
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Nice picks, Pinkie's the most fun but Rainbow's the tightest!
Amazing idea, bad execution. I hope I cam find more stories like this
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I know my writing is mediocre, but what in particular is bad about it?
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Nothing wrong with your writing imo. The story itself is ... common-or-garden, formulaic. Like a cheap porn video. I expected it to be longer, with characters discussing more the weirdness of her request, supporting each other and behaving more like a normal people in general. And them just going for a circleject and being totally ok with taking photos of their privates is not making me emotionally invested in it. They're very likeable and unique in the show, and writing them as 9 porn dolls with little personalities is off-putting.
Maybe there's a good example:
https://pastebin.com/WMC8N5ue
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Ah, that's understandable. I was aiming for straight fetish content and not character exploration, as what I always seem to see are penis-worship fics but rarely the same with vaginas. The idea of the girls just being so open about showing their intimate parts like an art exhibition was part of the kink for me.
This was super Goofy and fun and I loved the whole thing.
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Thanks!