Twilight Sparkle always found comfort in schedules and routines. Her daily life was so by the book, even when she'd need to see to official princess business, one could say it was almost written before she even woke up.
But when that routine is changed, interrupted, alternated and suspended, Twilight finds she will have a lot more on her plate than simply running Equestria.
Today marks the beginning of Twilight's really bad day.
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I wonder what happened to Twilight. Anyway, this reminds me of a recent SMG4 video from a two weeks ago.
I'm really interested to see how this goes.
Anybody else have the anticipation just waiting for her to die again. Also that can happen having the sudden reaction and not thinking of using a simple spell, damn it Twilight.
Did the cart just... split her in half!?
Also judging by how the story explains it Twilight isn't fully grown yet.
Loving it mate and can't wait for more. Its Discords loss of magic causing the time loop isn't it.
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I'm not going to say I've got some fun ideas about death, but...
It did. That can happen. I think. Pretty sure it can.
And yeah she isn't, it's set after everything but not "the future" yet
Thanks man
wait and see!
I'm thrilled to see another chapter!
So there is day 1 and day 2, but this is one day loop. It’s a little suspicious.
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Think of it from twilights point of view, day 1 was just an average day, minus the death, and the 2nd day and everything after is the repeat
That's regularly impossible to arrange. Is someone else playing with time-travel too?
No worries, Twilight. If he's repeating the same day as well, then even if you are late...you'll know where he'll be!
Iron giant I take it?
Nice twist. Didn't get the reference to now about the doctor.
Will there be a sequel?
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I had an idea for one at some point but no plans right now
2.7 billion years in a single timeloop is my record now. Our universe is 13.8 billion years old, you know.
That was awsome!
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Glad you enjoyed it
Thanks!
much enjoyment ensued. Thank
Really good but the ending felt well, sorta like a kind of "all wrapped up in a neat bow" kind of thing where it the end everyone is okay and it didn't matter. Kinda ruined it for me but I understand it's very hard to end so still good story.
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I did have a plan for a sequel at some point, but not for a long while yet
That's a fair assessment and honestly same, I just didn't know how to end it without it feeling like it was dragging on too much. Thanks for enjoying most of it anyway
11070745 The problem with this ending is, she no longer remembers that she promised to be Discord's friend. So as soon as Discord's magic gets fed up agaiin, you'll have the same thing happen again.
Isn't alicorns immortal? As in completely immortal to the point they can't drown, be Poisoned, or get injured?
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Oh jeez, your right, what's worst is everything might happen exactly the same so she will go through another couple months or years of repeating the same day!
It's just a loop of the same day for years before finally fixing it and then doing it all over again, it's like a loop of your entire life all in 1 day!
Honestly the story is amazing, I think my only complaint is the ending, the ending just made it seem like everything that happened, didn't happen, and in a way the ending is technically just another loop before fixing it again and then another loop over and over again because when she fixes everything, she forgets everything that happened including the promise she made to discord's magic, the ending is kinda dark if you think about it, how do we know this story is not another loop? What if Twilight has been going through the same day for billions of years and she only thinks it's been a couple years before fixing it?
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They are ageless, immortal, not invincible.
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They are invincible to certain types of materials and poison I believe, or atleast that's what I heard from people. I also believe Allicorns have a stronger and faster healing capabilities to the point it's really hard to kill an Allicorn and to even succeed it would probably take hours or days.
2.7 billion years? Wow. Would she even remember anything other than that day?