This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls: Super Pet Pandaemonium
Flash Sentry, a normal human, Midnight Sparkle, a girl with unlimited magical powers. One trying to make it in a school of Mutants, Inhumans, Meta-humans and other super-powered beings, the other struggling to find herself in a world she was only just born into and trying to control the vast magical power she has been given. Two very different people, but all that changes when the two of them are chosen by red & yellow lantern rings to be their new bearers. Now Flash must struggle to control his rage & Midnight must control her fear, all the while, the two must try to use their new found power for good and to help people while also not letting the power control them.
Chapters (11)
Great job on this first chapter. Love the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I admit I DID feel sorry for Flash seeing him bullied by Hardball and Komodo and I can see where he would get so jealous of even the benevolent super-powered teenagers. And I can also understand Midnight being frustrated by her inability to control her powers (though I DID enjoy seeing her helping out Glob again Manchester and Aftershock).
At any rate, on to the next chapter.
Again, the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up are well done in all the right places. Flash, I get you're frustrated and can understand WHY, but Sunset is at least TRYING to help. And, Twilight, yeah the "sweet sister scene" with Midnight was well-meaning, but advise is NOT your strong suit. But, yeah, I DID enjoy seeing Glob, Cypher and Warlock sitting next to Midnight. And I ALSO enjoyed seeing Midnight putting Manchester and his pals in their place again, even if most of the school got scared of Midnight. And now Flash and Midnight have the red and yellow rings. Hopefully, they will be able to learn to help each other with their issues.
Again, will very definitely be looking forward to more of this. But, I am also willing to be patient.
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As always thank you for the support of this series and glad you like the first two chapters
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You are quite welcome.
REALLY good job on the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I LOVED seeing Flash helping out Eye Boy against Hardball and Komodo (and getting in some payback on the latter to in the process). And, yeah, that was just plain bad timing that kept Midnight from explaining things to her friends and sister. And now Madame Rouge is going to get into the mess? Yeah, that definitely amps things up.
At any rate, definitely looking forward to more of this.
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I'm glad you like it
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Once again, my pleasure.
Again, wonderful job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Yeah, I have to say Flash IS letting his new power go to his head and needs a bit of a humility lesson. I believe there is an old quote about how those who fight monsters should be very careful that they don't become monsters themselves.
As for Midnight, I DID really like Warlock and Cypher warning her about how Manchester and his crew are still gunning for her and I have to grudging give Madame Rouge credit on the teen disguise.
At any rate, I'm VERY certainly looking forward to more of this story.
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As always thank you for the comment and the support
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You're very welcome, as usual.
REALLY good job on this latest chapter. Again, the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Yeah, Yellow Lantern Midnight opening up a can of Yellow Lantern-style kick keister on Manchester and his pals after they hurt some of Midnight's friends was a good detail (as far as showing her the downside to the Yellow Lantern power), as was the Rainbooms' getting worried. And Mirage/Madame Rogue's efforts in snagging Midnight are showing progress, which makes me worried (but worried in the way that is good for setting up future chapters).
Here is a couple of possible ideas for the epilogue:
Red Lantern Flash Sentry could start being mentored by Bruce Banner/the Hulk (who knows a thing or two about channeling Unstoppable Rage toward goals that benefit not just him, but others as well).
After Midnight FINALLY sees through Mirage/Madame Rouge's disguise, she could start being mentored by Doctor Fate (as far as controlling the power she had before she gained the Yellow Lantern Ring) and Batman (who knows more than a few things about how to use fear to help others and could also teach her some self-defense tricks in case she ever loses her powers).
But, I will respect that it is your decision and you don't have to use the ideas if you don't want to.
Anyway, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this.
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As always thank you for the comment, the support and the ideas
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You are very welcome.
REALLY good job on the latest chapter. Took a while, but was well worth the wait. Yeah, have to give grudgingly Mirage/Madame Rouge points for subtlety (I mean, if I didn't have the benefit of being somebody reading this story, I would be as fooled as Midnight right now), and yeah Sunset and Rainbow bringing in some of their newer friends to help in a super-powered-style intervention with Flash was some really good stuff. I just hope that Sunset and the others CAN eventually get through to him.
Anyway, the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up are all well done and I'm definitely looking forward to more of this.
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As always thanks for the comment and the support
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As always, you are quite welcome.
Excellent job on this latest chapter. The exchanges, characterizations, action (inside Flash's head) and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I'm glad Raven, Sunset and Rainbow, at least for the time being, managed to get through to Flash (hopefully, with luck, he'll learn how to channel that anger as a true force for good). And, yeah, have to grudgingly give Madame Rouge credit for her performance so far (though I hope Midnight wises up relatively soon).
VERY certainly looking forward to more of this.
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As always thank you for the comment and the support
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Once again, the pleasure is all mine.
Again, really good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked how Raven, Rainbow and Sunset helped Flash realize HIS new ring was a Lantern ring (in his case, one that runs on rage) as well as the introduction to Amadeus, Twilight pointing out how worried she got about Midnight and both Twilight AND Rainbow getting suspicious about Mirage.
VERY certainly looking forward to more of this.
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As always thank you for the comment and the support
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You're quite welcome.
Darn good work on this chapter. Absolutely loved the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. And, yeah, Twilight was right to do that check into Xavier's School and blow Mirage/Madame Rogue's cover story. Even if Midnight DIDN'T believe her right away, it still got Midnight thinking. And now, Madame Rogue exposed herself and I wonder what sort of tricks she will use to hang tough against Midnight (while Rogue's super-stretching and shape-shifting powers, along with her combat experience and cunning, make her a formidable opponent, Midnight's natural powers and the use of the Yellow Lantern Ring definitely make her a gal NOT to underestimate).
But, anyway, very certainly looking forward to more of this.
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As always thank you for the comment and the support
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As always, the pleasure is mine.
Whoa mama. Excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations, action and epilogue set-up in all the right places. Loved how Sunset, Flash and a few of their friends managed to get there in time to help Midnight against Madame Rouge, as well as Flash unlocking the emotional blocks keeping him from using his full power and Sunset calling out to Flash to keep him from going too far. And, yeah, that was a great Shout Out to the Venom movie by having Flash and the Butcher coming to that agreement to only use that sort of rage against the most irredeemably evil individuals out there.
Definitely going to be looking forward to the epilogue especially since we've got the H.I.V.E. still out there as well as Starro, Thanos, Darkseid, the human counterparts to Chrysalis and Sombra plus who knows how many other villains still out there.
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, thanks again
Thank you are the comment, the support and the ideas I'll see what I can do
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Again, you are extremely welcome.
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Oh, and I forgot earlier, but most of those weren't suggestions per say. Rather, they were recalls of villains that were mentioned before in this series (or, in Starro's case, actually appeared in the epilogue of the previous story in this series), but the gang haven't faced yet. As such, they were GUESSES rather than suggestions. The human counterparts of Chrysalis and Sombra were the only two that actually WERE suggestions.
But the fact remains, thank you AND you're welcome.
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and thanks
no problem
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You are very much welcome.
Sorry I took a while to get around to this. I got called to lunch before I could respond to this. But, anyway, great job on the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future adventure set-up in all the right places. Absolutely loved Flash getting help from Doc Samson as far as anger control, plus all the apologies both to AND from both Flash AND Midnight. Also enjoyed the thought of Midnight being recommended for Strange Academy. And, Flash and Sunset have a date? Sweet. And, yeah, the Taskmaster working with Madame Rouge? A really scary thought. And that text from Shining and Dean Cadance for Sci-Twi was superb set-up for what is, unless I miss my guess, going to be the gang's first encounter with Chrysalis's human counterpart.
Anyway, VERY definitely looking forward to more stuff from this universe.
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and also again thank you for your continued support
I'm glad you liked this story, no worries about replying
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You are extremely welcome. And thanks for being cool about it.