This story is a sequel to Princess Twilight’s Yacht Vacation
It’s been a year since Rainbow Dash talked to her counterpart back on the cruise but thanks to Twilight’s speech, they know what is going on between the portal of two worlds. With the knowledge of Pony Dash being in their world once, they don’t mind seeing the presents of two Dashes out in the open too.
Rainbow Dash desperately ask Sunset to spend a full day with her counterpart to which she accepts. As she takes her pony friend back to her world, she brings her to a park of one of her favorite hobbies. SKATEBOARDING!
Thanks to Daniyel099 for editing this.
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/292246/Daniyel099
Rainbow Dash Image is from The-Butcher-X
https://www.deviantart.com/the-butcher-x/art/Moment-before-the-accident-EqG-Shorts-785210318
I loved it!
I was thinking of checking out the whole series, but I just couldn't get into this. It needs some attention from an editor. You change tenses a lot, for one thing. Also, the dialogue is a bit awkward. It's hard to explain, but there's just something a bit off about it. Sorry I can't be more helpful in that regard.