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Twilight and Pinkie Pie's friends are out of Ponyville to get more citizens for the Hearth's Warming ceremony tonight. When they head outside, they've encountered a pony who's never been around like other creatures but unlike them, It's been centuries since she left on her own.

Twilight felt curious on why she's here as she invited the visitor into her castle. When she and Pinkie Pie learned who she really is, they're not only surprised, but so will Celestia and Luna when they see her.

Thanks to Daniyel099 for editing this.
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/292246/Daniyel099

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 30 )

Very interesting and it's cool to see Snowdrop again but I wonder where she been over these past years and Luna wanted to see her again after being banished to the Moon I guess you will have her chance then I wonder how this will work guess we'll find out next time

“I have partial blindness. It’s hard to make friends for myself.” Snowdrop replied.

Partial?

“Well...not internally. Let’s just say I’ve done something that hasn’t been done in Equestria history.” Twilight said, looking at her wings.

Which is?

“Well yes, but they’re princesses.” Snowdrop looking at the map where Canterlot is located. “They told me they want to show their support in the season of winter from where they live, so others can receive the recognition.”

When she says recognition, does she mean credit?

She places it in front of Snowdrop with a closer feel which surprised her.

Closer feel?

“Give me about thirty minutes until I’m ready, you and your friends learnt about some great friendship lessons.” She commented as she sat on the floor..

Wait, how will she read it?

the description is a bit hard to read

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1. It was mostly my editor, I thought it looked better.

2. What Twilight did in Magical Mystery Cure.

3. Yes

4. I'm changing it to closer look

5. Opening the pages, reading the lessons of what Twilight and her friends wrote, does that cross your mind?

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I've tried to make it surprising since this is a chapter story. I get it's not edit like the story itself but I always felt that way when I start a new story description. Thanks for the respectful feedback.

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The fact that other people are getting the credit is a little sad.

Yes, that did cross my mind. But i mean is if she’s blind how can she read it?

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She can still look at the book closer to see. Also how is other people getting the credit a little sad? Everyone deserves respect.

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Oh, so she just has bad vision. Also, are they given recognition for the snowflakes or the winter season?

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The Winter Season, but mainly Hearth's Warming.

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Ohh, I thought they were given credit for the snowflakes, because didn’t snowdrop create them or something like that?

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She did, you're gonna have to wait for the next two chapters to come out to understand her purpose in this.

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I thought her only purpose was to visit the princesses.

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She is, like mention in the chapter, she needs to make an impression after centuries from her last encounter with them.

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Oh, you made it seem like there was more to it than that.

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I'm not the best at doing more (Even if I tried), but the later chapters will show more of Snowdrop's goal.

To think she rejects those ideas for a proper impression is just unbelievable.

Wait, is she rejecting the idea of a proper impression or the idea of friendship over a proper impression?

“They almost look like a snow color.” Applejack added, which caused Snowdrop to back away.

“What’s that supposed to mean!?” She reacted.

Why did she think it means?

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1. Your second guess is what I meant.

2. She got offended. Have you ever consider wonder what a pony would react if you talk about their skin color (or fur), they might won’t take it easy.

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But, weren’t they talking about her eyes being snow colored?

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Because, I was wondering what you were talking about.

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I think what I meant is that Snowdrop is an outcast since she never made as many friends like the other characters. So she didn't expect anypony to express that about her.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

I can’t wait for the next chapter

This was really good. Something about reunions get to me.

Well, that was short but nice and sweet :twilightsmile:

I’ll be honest. Is a bit weird for me to read a winter fic in July but I was in the mood for something cheerful

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Hey, last year I wrote 12 chapters of a Christmas story before December even occurred.

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Fair enough¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Thought my comment was mostly a complement, the fic might have being somewhat short. But it was a nice read

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