This story is a sequel to A Little Adventure in Alola
After learning about an upcoming friendship celebration, Ash’s Pikachu and his beloved Nica agree to pay their old friends a visit, once again stepping into the land of Equestria. With their love blooming and eggs close to hatching, they want nothing more than to share their wonderful experiences with their pony friends.
However, Tempest, a self-exiled unicorn, is leading the Storm King’s army to invade Canterlot after months of planning and preparations.
As the clash between Storm's forces and the Thunder duo occurs, Pikachu and Raichu are about to prove that the friendship the ponies shared with the other races isn’t a weakness, but their greatest strength.
List of proof-readers:
Special thanks to UnknownGiggs
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Jay+Tarrant
for intense and detailed proof-reading.
And also Rated+Ponystar for writing an opening for me.
Such a cute little epilogue.
Nica verses Tempest makes me think of Bruce Lees final fight.
After all that powerup, Storm King still couldnt handle Cannonball Pinkie.
Does that mean she can lift Mjolnir? So cute.
Tempest used Shock. It was not very effective.
Oh, I very much look forward to that.
After reading this, I kinda want a story where Pikachu and Nica raise their Pichu children while having having to protect them from danger. (If you made an account on fanfiction.net, you could do just that since it would probably focus more on Pokemon than it would on mlp)
still not fulfilling, lad
you have a lot of trouble with open ends
you leave them every-fucking-where you mean to end a story
The only problem is that without them being captured they will not meet a certain cat and explore a little outside Equestria, or have Fizzlepop as another trainer
Little? It's 12,5k words long.
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Nica as Thor, that's an interesting comparation.
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Poor Tempest, she picked the wrong enemy.
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You'll have to imagine it. The series is over after all.
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I already uplaoded "Little Lost Raichu" on fanficiton.net, but it barely got any attention. So many chapters and only 4 mere comments on the entire story. I don't think it's worth it.
As for protecting them from danger, you have to remember that Nica is the mon here. She's the most defensive/protection experiences pokemon in the world, an ultimate bodyguard. Good luck to all fools trying to bypass her defenses in attempt to hurt her children.
As for raising them, Nica will no doubt try to teach both Pichu how to read and write so they can comunicate with humans (unless ponies provide them with translating collars). She'll also try to teach them good manners, the importance of helping and kindness, and a very advanced defensive fighting style. Pikachu will no doubt take them for short adventures and will try to share his love for battling and more offensive way of battling. In the end it will all come down to personalities of those Pichu and what patch they'll decide to take.
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Maybe, but they still defeated Storm King's army and in the end he'll be captured in stone anyway. This means that everything that he conquered will be liberated so Equestria can still make contact with other species.
If the Storm King fell for that he deserves to be turned to stone and left somewhere Discord can come and taunt him, even if the Storm King will not be aware.
I am not sure why you think people hate this series, your stories got featured each time a chapter went out, and they did so again for this an the epílogo, I certainly would love this to contenue, but at the end, it is your decision, so all I have left is wish you gook luck, and thank you for these stories :D.
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I agree with this statement. This series is actually pretty damn good and I do hope to see another story in this series one day
this is fantastic, I'm sad to see it go but all good things come to an end. Thank you for making such an amazing series.
P.S. This series never overstayed.
While this is fun for a nice twist ending of the movie. I am kinda worry that you might have to find another way for Equestria to connect with those in the south region, like desert people, Abyssanian(cat people), Pirate Group(Bird people) and most important race like Hippogriff/Seapony...
Not count how friendship will reform our Tempest too. There no chance for her to sing a tragic song of her past story "Open up your eye" anymore (Except you don't plan to reform her)...
This is far from over, dear writer...
Haven't finished reading it yet but i wanted to say this in case i forgot once i do finish it.
Durring the segment where Pikachu and Nica are talking what their child could be and end up like. Nica constantly was switching gender when talking about their future child, in the same sentence sometimes too.
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True, unless Pharynx will decide to repeat the movie's plot and do something like: "This is Sparta" and throw Storm King's statue off the castle-wall or something. Good luck finding remains then.
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Stories that got features at least once will always fetaure again during every update, but the side-effect is that they'll dissapear from featured box very quickly. I think in the past it was very hard to get your story featured, but once it did, it stayed in the box for a very long time, but nowdays it is different. Just something I noticed.
You're welcome. On a side-note, what was your favorite thing about this one-shot story, or maybe what was your favorite Pikachu/Nica momment in this big finale?
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I fear it did. In any case, I'm still proud with the main story since it was quite popular and gave Nica/Raichu a chance to shine. As for the sequels, well... they didn't caught much attention or interest to most readers, but at the very still they were still enjoyable for fans who decided to stick with the story to the very end (and those who shipped NIcachu from the start).
Out of curiosity, what was your fave moment in this finale?
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This shouldn't be a problem.
All this time those were under King Storm's control. Now when his army has been smashed and he himself was turned into stone by Pharynx, those other nations are now free, or that ponies and their alies can do a liberation campain (which should be easy since there are barely any troops and officers left).
Also, let's be honest here, during the main movie, the ponies may have meet with many other races and visited many locations, but instead of grant aliance that would overcome Storm's King, all we got was small group to assist main 6 who somehow defeated army that easily took over Equestira. So yeah... there's very little respect I have to the jorney main 6 had since little came from it.
In case of this story however, ponies are a lot closer to other species as they fought invading army together, so they'll most likely try to liberate other teritories and make strong connections that way.
As for Tempest, will she be reformed is hard to tell.
This is far from over, dear writer...
Sorry, but after getting only 33 upvotes and 3 downvotes from what was meant to be a grant finale, I see no point in continuing this series, Also, the only think I can picture in the future was Nica being hired as a profesor at the school of friendship (most likely in art of how to defend a friend from danger and show kindness and respect to others).
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I know, I know, but it is done on purpose. Not only she's unsure if her child will be a male or female, but she's also going through a phase... It should be pretty normal for her to call her unborn child he at one point and her at the next.
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The part where Nica and Pikachu talk to each other not caring they had Ponies watching them XD.
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that's a hard question i would call a lot of this my favorite but if i must choose... it's the part where Nica roasts Pikachu unintentionally when talking about their child possible personality, t'was hilarious
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This right here. This story is very well accepted. It's just the reality of fanfiction that some stories won't get lots of comments. This is still a really good series, even if if feels like it's getting cut short.
I only started reading this series a short time ago and fell in love, just in time to for the series to end . . . I might've cried a little bit.
This story/series is so beautiful! All the hearts for Nica, the best Chu of all! Even better than Ash's Pikachu! Though it would've been really cool if the newborn Pichu could talk because of being born in Equestria, like how Alolan Raichu look like rubber plushies because they evolved on Alola.
Love this series so much~~~!
And so ends one of my favorite series. Thanks for writing this! It's been a wonderful ride.
Storm King: Uh oh!
Ash's Pikachu: Pikaaa… *unleashes a super charged Thunderbolt attack at the Storm King like a lightning strike that somehow formed the head of Zekrom* CHUUUUUUUUUUU!
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I suppose it is romantic when those in love ignore their surroundings. Glad you liked it.
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I suppose it's not easy for him to maintain his no-need-to-evolve ideology around kind Raichu like Nica. Some roasing was unavoidable. Also, it must be an unexpected idea for him to be on receiving end for a change, challenged by his own Pichu child for the honor of all Pichu. (Still, personally I find it a bit unfair. When Ash's Pikachu was still a Pichu, he was really glad to evolve into Pikachu, an evolution from happiness, and so far no Pichu seems against the idea of becomong Pikachu. But Pikachu evolving into a Raichu suddenly is a big deal and is very rare with places like Pikachu valley being a thing. Seems a bit hipocritical to me).
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Well, the main story was well received, but every next sequel got worse and worse score and a lot less reviews, so it is a clear indicator that the interest in this series was dying down or that path I lead this series wasn't one that my readers wanted.
In comparation, my tiny Twilight series has been quite popular, and while sequels were less popular, they stil lreceived stable ammount of upvotes and high number of viewers. With my Flutterbat story, even if sequels go less viewers, the upvoting score was still solid and lots of people asked me to continue this series.
With Nica's story, the drop was massive. It just makes me wonder if I should've ended this series on Little Lost Raichu or was there a better path that I could follow it up. In any case, it is too late to take that back. Maybe just clash between Nica and Ash Pikachu's ideology was what turned many readers away. Maybe it could've been better if the follow up story would be about Starlight and Rainbow Dash exploring pokemon world or Nica becoming a teacher for the school of friendship. Those were alternative paths I could've taken, but oh well.
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Awwww... As someone whose favorite pokemon is Raichu, it feels good to hear that.
I suppose it could be a thing, but it would make the translating collar a bit unnecesery.
I prefer to think Alolan Raichu is result of those pokemon srfing between islands rather than for their looks or diet.
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You're welcome.
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Ummm... no offense, but I am not a fan of people overstaminating Ash's Pikachu, it kind of overshadows his evolution way too much. If anything, Ace would be the one to perform such a feat.
Ace (Alolan Raichu) was always about creativity and experimentation, so it would fit him to create a very powerful thunderbolt and form it into head of Zekrom. Heck, he can just use move "Nasty Plot", "Surf", use Psychic to turn water into Zekrom's head, then fill it with insanly strong Thunderbolt. All he need to do is to replce dragon shape with Zekrom's shape.
Also, as Alolan Raichu glass cannon, his electric attacks are no less than 50% stronger than Pikachu's, and nasty plot would double that, then add power of surf and Psychic, and he strike Storm King with attack with power of 9 Pikachu's thunderbolts combined together. There will be only ashes left after this, I tell you that. (In fact, this technique seems like a really strong tool against Dynamaxed pokemon.)
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Ok. But that would be awesome in my book it would be like Team Rocket getting what they deserve when they try to steal something.
I found it fun
If a little hard to read sometimes
There were a few times in the series where sentences didn't make sense
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Hey, in your next fic, think you could show how the ponies interact with Pokemon, as in after the portal is fully open? Like Quibble and Daring exploring so of the Pokemon regions from relics alongside some Pokemon that have joined up with them, or some Pokemon having entered the pony world and started living with ponies, live an Kricketune and Octavia are arguing with an Exploud and Vinyl. It could be less of a story and more of a collection of oneshots that have happened after the main story has gone through. This type of fic could let you build Pokemon teams for the ponies and non-ponies of Equestria. What do you think?
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Too busy with my other contenct. Also, my recent pokemon crossovers weren't all that good, so I decided to stop here.
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Aw, then, do you think you could find someone to do my idea?
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I'm afraid not. If someone would want to make a spin-off series that takes place after this story, I would be able to provide some assistnace, but nothing more than that.
Ah I wanted to see the storm king get just desserts.
Whoa there...
There's more likes now.
Just finished binge reading the full series. I enjoyed every second of it! I know this series is over, but I wouldn't mind a side story with trainer starlight and trainer rainbow. Other than that, I'm glad this series ended on a high note!