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This story is a sequel to A Little Adventure in Alola


After learning about an upcoming friendship celebration, Ash’s Pikachu and his beloved Nica agree to pay their old friends a visit, once again stepping into the land of Equestria. With their love blooming and eggs close to hatching, they want nothing more than to share their wonderful experiences with their pony friends.

However, Tempest, a self-exiled unicorn, is leading the Storm King’s army to invade Canterlot after months of planning and preparations.

As the clash between Storm's forces and the Thunder duo occurs, Pikachu and Raichu are about to prove that the friendship the ponies shared with the other races isn’t a weakness, but their greatest strength.

List of proof-readers:
Special thanks to UnknownGiggs
and
Jay+Tarrant
for intense and detailed proof-reading.
And also Rated+Ponystar for writing an opening for me.

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Comments ( 18 )

Such a cute little epilogue.

Nica verses Tempest makes me think of Bruce Lees final fight.

After all that powerup, Storm King still couldnt handle Cannonball Pinkie. :pinkiecrazy:

Rainbow Dash raised her foreleg, placing it on Nica’s shoulder. “I must say, it’s really cool how you can take praise and be proud of your skills now. You have changed a lot.” She looked at the sky while withdrawing her foreleg. “The old Nica would cover her blushing face and say how unworthy she was.”

Does that mean she can lift Mjolnir? So cute.

Feeling growing frustration, Tempest jumped forward, grabbing her opponent's tail. She jumped and swung her opponent with her foreleg, slamming her into the ground as Raichu yelped in pain. She lowered her broken horn, electrocuting her opponent... with little result. The usual smell of burned fur wasn't even there.

Tempest used Shock. It was not very effective.

As the mist displaying the image of the Storm King vanished from his sight. Pharynx dropped his disguise, revealing his grinning face. His two fellow changelings did the same. "What a fool. He's going right into my trap. It’s actually insulting that someone like him even got to conquer anything at all." He turned around, examining the interior of the captured ship. "I think I'll take a few of those back to the hive to improve our defenses." He rubbed his chin. "I wonder if Thorax will be mad if I dealt with the Storm King using his own petrifying crystals. Now that would be a fitting end for this pathetic dictator."

Oh, I very much look forward to that. :ajsmug:

After reading this, I kinda want a story where Pikachu and Nica raise their Pichu children while having having to protect them from danger. (If you made an account on fanfiction.net, you could do just that since it would probably focus more on Pokemon than it would on mlp)

still not fulfilling, lad
you have a lot of trouble with open ends
you leave them every-fucking-where you mean to end a story

The only problem is that without them being captured they will not meet a certain cat and explore a little outside Equestria, or have Fizzlepop as another trainer

Such a cute little epilogue

Little? It's 12,5k words long.

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Does that mean she can lift Mjolnir? So cute.

Nica as Thor, that's an interesting comparation.

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Tempest used Shock. It was not very effective.

Poor Tempest, she picked the wrong enemy.

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Oh, I very much look forward to that.

You'll have to imagine it. The series is over after all.

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After reading this, I kinda want a story where Pikachu and Nica raise their Pichu children while having having to protect them from danger. (If you made an account on fanfiction.net, you could do just that since it would probably focus more on Pokemon than it would on mlp)

I already uplaoded "Little Lost Raichu" on fanficiton.net, but it barely got any attention. So many chapters and only 4 mere comments on the entire story. I don't think it's worth it.
As for protecting them from danger, you have to remember that Nica is the mon here. She's the most defensive/protection experiences pokemon in the world, an ultimate bodyguard. Good luck to all fools trying to bypass her defenses in attempt to hurt her children.
As for raising them, Nica will no doubt try to teach both Pichu how to read and write so they can comunicate with humans (unless ponies provide them with translating collars). She'll also try to teach them good manners, the importance of helping and kindness, and a very advanced defensive fighting style. Pikachu will no doubt take them for short adventures and will try to share his love for battling and more offensive way of battling. In the end it will all come down to personalities of those Pichu and what patch they'll decide to take.

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The only problem is that without them being captured they will not meet a certain cat and explore a little outside Equestria, or have Fizzlepop as another trainer

Maybe, but they still defeated Storm King's army and in the end he'll be captured in stone anyway. This means that everything that he conquered will be liberated so Equestria can still make contact with other species.

If the Storm King fell for that he deserves to be turned to stone and left somewhere Discord can come and taunt him, even if the Storm King will not be aware.

I am not sure why you think people hate this series, your stories got featured each time a chapter went out, and they did so again for this an the epílogo, I certainly would love this to contenue, but at the end, it is your decision, so all I have left is wish you gook luck, and thank you for these stories :D.

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I agree with this statement. This series is actually pretty damn good and I do hope to see another story in this series one day

this is fantastic, I'm sad to see it go but all good things come to an end. Thank you for making such an amazing series.

P.S. This series never overstayed.

While this is fun for a nice twist ending of the movie. I am kinda worry that you might have to find another way for Equestria to connect with those in the south region, like desert people, Abyssanian(cat people), Pirate Group(Bird people) and most important race like Hippogriff/Seapony...

Not count how friendship will reform our Tempest too. There no chance for her to sing a tragic song of her past story "Open up your eye" anymore (Except you don't plan to reform her)...

This is far from over, dear writer...

Haven't finished reading it yet but i wanted to say this in case i forgot once i do finish it.

Durring the segment where Pikachu and Nica are talking what their child could be and end up like. Nica constantly was switching gender when talking about their future child, in the same sentence sometimes too.

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If the Storm King fell for that he deserves to be turned to stone and left somewhere Discord can come and taunt him, even if the Storm King will not be aware.

True, unless Pharynx will decide to repeat the movie's plot and do something like: "This is Sparta" and throw Storm King's statue off the castle-wall or something. Good luck finding remains then.

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I am not sure why you think people hate this series, your stories got featured each time a chapter went out, and they did so again for this an the epílogo,

Stories that got features at least once will always fetaure again during every update, but the side-effect is that they'll dissapear from featured box very quickly. I think in the past it was very hard to get your story featured, but once it did, it stayed in the box for a very long time, but nowdays it is different. Just something I noticed.

I certainly would love this to contenue, but at the end, it is your decision, so all I have left is wish you gook luck, and thank you for these stories :D.

You're welcome. On a side-note, what was your favorite thing about this one-shot story, or maybe what was your favorite Pikachu/Nica momment in this big finale?

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P.S. This series never overstayed.

I fear it did. In any case, I'm still proud with the main story since it was quite popular and gave Nica/Raichu a chance to shine. As for the sequels, well... they didn't caught much attention or interest to most readers, but at the very still they were still enjoyable for fans who decided to stick with the story to the very end (and those who shipped NIcachu from the start).
Out of curiosity, what was your fave moment in this finale?

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I am kinda worry that you might have to find another way for Equestria to connect with those in the south region, like desert people, Abyssanian(cat people), Pirate Group(Bird people) and most important race like Hippogriff/Seapony...

This shouldn't be a problem.
All this time those were under King Storm's control. Now when his army has been smashed and he himself was turned into stone by Pharynx, those other nations are now free, or that ponies and their alies can do a liberation campain (which should be easy since there are barely any troops and officers left).
Also, let's be honest here, during the main movie, the ponies may have meet with many other races and visited many locations, but instead of grant aliance that would overcome Storm's King, all we got was small group to assist main 6 who somehow defeated army that easily took over Equestira. So yeah... there's very little respect I have to the jorney main 6 had since little came from it.
In case of this story however, ponies are a lot closer to other species as they fought invading army together, so they'll most likely try to liberate other teritories and make strong connections that way.

As for Tempest, will she be reformed is hard to tell.

This is far from over, dear writer...
Sorry, but after getting only 33 upvotes and 3 downvotes from what was meant to be a grant finale, I see no point in continuing this series, Also, the only think I can picture in the future was Nica being hired as a profesor at the school of friendship (most likely in art of how to defend a friend from danger and show kindness and respect to others).

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Durring the segment where Pikachu and Nica are talking what their child could be and end up like. Nica constantly was switching gender when talking about their future child, in the same sentence sometimes too.

I know, I know, but it is done on purpose. Not only she's unsure if her child will be a male or female, but she's also going through a phase... It should be pretty normal for her to call her unborn child he at one point and her at the next.

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The part where Nica and Pikachu talk to each other not caring they had Ponies watching them XD.

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that's a hard question i would call a lot of this my favorite but if i must choose... it's the part where Nica roasts Pikachu unintentionally when talking about their child possible personality, t'was hilarious

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