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CommanderX5


Jan
13th
2020

Chapter 18,5/19 final improvements · 9:14am January 13th

Hello everyone.

So long story short, I finished last changes to "Little Lost Pikachu."

In chapter 18,5 I added additional scene in the end (which I marked in bold), and I changed chapter 6 - Honor and Respect to Chapter 19.

While changes in Pikachu vs Nica battle were minor, at the end of chapter 19 part 2 I made significant changes and also marked in bold.

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Jan
12th
2020

Chapter 8 improved. Need your voting and feedback. · 7:02pm January 12th

Hello everyone.

As you already noticed, together with DJskywalker we have been trying to improve "Little Lost Pikachu" by changing some more controvertial chapters. The first change was Pikachu/Nica's talk about their believes.
Next one was Pikachu fighting Ninetales instead.
This change however is rewritting of chapter 7 part 1 (for the sake of continuity), and more importantly, chapter 8 part 2 has been expanded.

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Jan
3rd
2020

Ninetales vs Pikachu, needs your voting · 10:18am January 3rd

Hello everyone. The massive change for "Little Lost Pikachu" that we worked on is finally here, and I need your votes to determine if it improve the story and should be added, or is it better to keep the story as it is.

Here are the links and I encourage you all to give it a read and give me your vote. I know "Little Lost Pikachu" had some moments that hold this story back, and I wish to at least adress some of it before finishing this series.

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Dec
17th
2019

Improving Little Lost Pikachu, I need your feedback. · 9:03am Dec 17th, 2019

Greetings loyal fans of this series. I wanted to inform you all that since this series is comming to an end, I decided to listen to DJSkywalker feedback and together with him fix the more controvertial and less enjoyable part of "Little Lost Pikachu" so I can close this series without any regrets.

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Aug
27th
2019

A request. · 8:39am Aug 27th, 2019

Hello everyone.

This is unusual of me, but I was asked to spread this message:

3phantoms

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Aug
13th
2019

Your favorite Twiny's feat? · 8:25am Aug 13th, 2019

Hello everyone.

As you all know, Twiny ended up enjoying the challenging life in the giant world as she constantly pushed her limits, both magical and physical, which means that despite her miniscule size she managed to do some impressive feats.

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Feb
3rd
2019

Sequel is up · 12:02pm Feb 3rd, 2019

In short, "A Little Adveture in Alola" has been uploaded. Depending if it will perform well enough to become a story on its own (upvote/downvote ratio, feedback, fave number), I will either:
Upload epilogue to Little Lost Pikachu with link to the sequel.
or
Remove "A Little Adventure in Alola" and continued "Little Lost Pikachu" (though personally I think it will be way less fitting).

Hope the sequel will succed this time.

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Jan
13th
2019

Sequel title voting. · 7:58pm Jan 13th, 2019

To all fans of Little Lost Raichu and Little Lost Pikachu, I plan to give it a try and post the part of the story that takes place after Twilight open portal to pokemon world as a sequel. (Hopefully this adventurous aproach with bigger stakes will hold well as its own story).

So far Little Lost Pikachu held slice of life formula with minimal stakes, well, this is about to change.

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Aug
4th
2018

The sequel is up · 1:29pm Aug 4th, 2018

And so Little Lost Raichu has come to an end and Little Lost Pikachu is up and running.

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Jun
12th
2018

Sequel Candeled. "Little Lost Raichu" continue. · 9:15am Jun 12th, 2018

Greetings my faithful readers.

After some thinking and checking the feedback, I decided that the sequel "Raichu, Defender of Equestria" can't exacly stand as it's own story, nor as a sequel.

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