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  • 1 week
    Nica Fanart

    Hello everyone.

    PLukol draw a scene from my story and I wish to share it with all of you.

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    1 comments · 195 views
  • 12 weeks
    Chapter 18,5/19 final improvements

    Hello everyone.

    So long story short, I finished last changes to "Little Lost Pikachu."

    In chapter 18,5 I added additional scene in the end (which I marked in bold), and I changed chapter 6 - Honor and Respect to Chapter 19.

    While changes in Pikachu vs Nica battle were minor, at the end of chapter 19 part 2 I made significant changes and also marked in bold.

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    0 comments · 238 views
  • 12 weeks
    Chapter 8 improved. Need your voting and feedback.

    Hello everyone.

    As you already noticed, together with DJskywalker we have been trying to improve "Little Lost Pikachu" by changing some more controvertial chapters. The first change was Pikachu/Nica's talk about their believes.
    Next one was Pikachu fighting Ninetales instead.

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    0 comments · 56 views
  • 13 weeks
    Ninetales vs Pikachu, needs your voting

    Hello everyone. The massive change for "Little Lost Pikachu" that we worked on is finally here, and I need your votes to determine if it improve the story and should be added, or is it better to keep the story as it is.

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    0 comments · 170 views
  • 16 weeks
    Improving Little Lost Pikachu, I need your feedback.

    Greetings loyal fans of this series. I wanted to inform you all that since this series is comming to an end, I decided to listen to DJSkywalker feedback and together with him fix the more controvertial and less enjoyable part of "Little Lost Pikachu" so I can close this series without any regrets.

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    0 comments · 123 views
Jan
12th
2020

Chapter 8 improved. Need your voting and feedback. · 7:02pm January 12th

Hello everyone.

As you already noticed, together with DJskywalker we have been trying to improve "Little Lost Pikachu" by changing some more controvertial chapters. The first change was Pikachu/Nica's talk about their believes.
Next one was Pikachu fighting Ninetales instead.
This change however is rewritting of chapter 7 part 1 (for the sake of continuity), and more importantly, chapter 8 part 2 has been expanded.

We added Pikachu/Gliscor scene to show how members of Astra's team view Nica overtraining herself, and also the Pikachu/Nica's talk at the hospital bed was also rewritten substantionally.

Here are links:
Chapter 7 part 1
Chapter 8 part 2

Aside from voting, I would also like to ask for your feedback, because at the moment I can't tell if our work to improve "Little Lost Pikachu" wasn't a waste of time. (So far the fact that the story is downvoted each time I upload improved chapter is the only feedback I got, which is discouraging).

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