Chapter 8 improved. Need your voting and feedback. · 7:02pm Jan 12th, 2020
Hello everyone.
As you already noticed, together with DJskywalker we have been trying to improve "Little Lost Pikachu" by changing some more controvertial chapters. The first change was Pikachu/Nica's talk about their believes.
Next one was Pikachu fighting Ninetales instead.
This change however is rewritting of chapter 7 part 1 (for the sake of continuity), and more importantly, chapter 8 part 2 has been expanded.
We added Pikachu/Gliscor scene to show how members of Astra's team view Nica overtraining herself, and also the Pikachu/Nica's talk at the hospital bed was also rewritten substantionally.
Here are links:
Chapter 7 part 1
Chapter 8 part 2
Aside from voting, I would also like to ask for your feedback, because at the moment I can't tell if our work to improve "Little Lost Pikachu" wasn't a waste of time. (So far the fact that the story is downvoted each time I upload improved chapter is the only feedback I got, which is discouraging).
