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  • 164 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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  • 192 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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  • 193 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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  • 193 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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  • 197 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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May
19th
2020

Chapter 6 part 2, Kyuubi's size change · 9:17am May 19th, 2020

Hello everyone.

I will be brief, I made some quick changes to chapter 6 part 2 due to feedback since Kyuubi being at different size was only mentioned, and I feel it should be expanded upon. Here are two changes I made:

“We should make our stand for the contest! I got all the stuff to make it at home!” Nightbright said.

“I’ll get started making more potions!” Rosey replied.

I’ll help too… but at the moment I can’t tell if we’re trying to make purification potions, or boost the healing properties of plants and healing potions. Oh well, as long as it works I have no complaints. She stopped following her friends as she glanced back at her large tails. Note to myself. Ask Princess Celestia to alter my age before the contest.

Rosey turned around and looked up, giving her friend an encouraging glance. "You know you don't need to reduce your size for our sake." She smiled warmly. "We are perfectly comfortable with you, no matter the size, and other students and teachers got used to it a long time ago." She winked. "Not to mention all that fluffy fur to hug. The more the better."

Nightbright turned around and nodded. "We know how uncomfortable you feel in your younger form, having only quarter of your usual magic and paper-like skin. You don't like it so why?"

I know, I know, but I don't want to stand out too much in a cramped room. Not to mention it would look a big awkward if I was bigger than our stand. She stroke her own tails. And I don't want to accidentally damage other student's work with my tails. It is bad enough when my tails accidently knock books of other student's tables.

"Good point," Rosey said before gesturing for the group to follow her. "Just don't shrink yourself too much. You still need enough magic to bless our potions during the presentation."

Kyuubi smiled back as she followed her trotting friends, taking one long step for a few of theirs.

Dr. Hornheal could only smile at the sight. Ah... to be young and excited again. He turned to the potion on his table and wondered. If that holy magic can do things like this... along with curing corruption... what else could it do. If indeed it was a power gifted by a god, the possibilities had to be limitless. Curing illness? Maybe even mental ones? Could it save somepony from the brink of death? Could it even bring the dead back to life?

“That fox... kitsune... is going to change things... I know she will...”


Thank God for toilets, that’s all I can say, Kyuubi said, sighing in relief as she flushed. Getting off, she opened the stall and made for the sink to wash her paws. Good thing the princess agreed to alter my age this morning, or else fitting into a stall and using toilet would be a nightmare, she thought, her size now no bigger than an average mare.

She was now only a little bit bigger than her best friends, who has grown quite a bit since they first meet at the library. As much as she wished she could remain at this age so she could talk with her friends and classmates as equal, she now had only a quarter of her usual raw power and durability, barely enough to bless potions and plants with her magic. On the bright side, she could always return to her normal size very quickly in case of emergency.

With her paws wet, she rubbed them against a silvery towel with golden insignia, while the toilet itself was clean enough that she could see her reflection in the marble floor, which reflected on her now more luxurious life among the high society. Back in the human lands, they were still using chamber pots and Kyuubi had often had to go outside to do her business. Learning of such a way had made it much more of a relief for Kyuubi. Of course, the learning process was embarrassing, but the less said about that the better.

I wonder how much technology has advanced among the humans since I left?

I hope those changes fits well and will make it clealer that Kyuubi is at her reduced age. Long story short, she asks Celestia to make her younger from time to time so she can fit in better with her friends and class, but it also makes her weak and very uncomfortable, which is why she does this very rarely.

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