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CommanderX5


Jun
12th
2018

Sequel Candeled. "Little Lost Raichu" continue. · 9:15am Jun 12th, 2018

Greetings my faithful readers.

After some thinking and checking the feedback, I decided that the sequel "Raichu, Defender of Equestria" can't exacly stand as it's own story, nor as a sequel.

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Jun
11th
2018

I need your Feedback. · 12:36am Jun 11th, 2018

Alright, here's the situation.

Beacuse Nica's time in Equestira made a shift into an adventure with big stakes, and since the main story was already very long, I wrote a sequel "Raichu, Defender of Equestira."

Considering 45 upvotes/3 downvotes ratio, low feedback and the fact that prologue in the sequel I added in hope it will explain the situation to new readers is also epilogue of the main story, (and may not be the best way to start a story), I feel a bit conflicted.

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Jun
9th
2018

Ask Nica (roleplaying blog) · 10:38pm Jun 9th, 2018

Alright, so here's the deal. While writting my tiny Twilight series, to celebrate 1000 likes on my Celestia's Tiny Student story, I wrote a blog called "Ask Twiny Sparkle"

While "Lost Little Raichu" is waaaay less popular, I still would like giving try to something similiar.

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May
27th
2018

Final Feedback - Lost Little Raichu · 5:46pm May 27th, 2018

Considering that the story "Lost Little Raichu" is going to an end (the next chapter will be an Epilogue with link to the sequel), I would like to ask as follow:

After reading this story from prologue to chapter 25, is there anything in your opinion that can be improved before we move into the sequel?

Is there any chapter that seemed flawed/out of place that the story would benefit greatly if improved?

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Mar
24th
2018

Side story "Raichu for Hire" · 8:49pm Mar 24th, 2018

Greetings all fans of Nica and her adventures in Equestria.

I would like to inform you all about the side-story I uploaded and explain the meaning behind it.

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Jun
4th
2017

Small changes · 12:03am Jun 4th, 2017

Greetings everyone.

I just wanted to inform you that after receiving some feedback and talking with my proof-readers, we came to conclusion that Chapter 1 part 1 would serve a much better role as a prologue, while prologue is better as its own chapter that should be introduced a little bit later.

As result. Chapter 1 part 1 is now Prologue.
Chapter 1 part 2 is now chapter 1 part 1.
Prologue is now chapter 1 part 2 ( Hitman and Master )

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May
7th
2017

Hiatus, new story · 8:43am May 7th, 2017

Greetings everyone.

I have bad news for you all. Due to lack of editing assistance on "Ponyville's Tiny Librarian" I decided to put this story on Hiatus. I will return to this story at one point in the future once I'll find someone who can help me keep quality of the story on high level.


In the meanwhile, I decided to write a Pokemon/MLP crossover with two OC's that I always wanted to use, but didn't know how until now.

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Jun
10th
2016

Backstory of Twiny's guard Overwatch. The story is out. · 8:23pm Jun 10th, 2016

I know it was already mentioned in author notes, but for all who like Overwatch and Steel Blade and would like to read more about their backstory, here's link to my editor's story he just published.

In Sheep's Clothing

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May
29th
2016

Celestia's nightmare, I need your opinion · 6:56pm May 29th, 2016

Saying it simply, one of my editors suggested to delete this scene since most readers seems to get tired of the punishments, however some commented that they wanted to see Celestia having such nightmare base on books Luna was reading, so I am adding this blog to ask for your opinion.

Should I add this scene at the beggining of next chapter, or instead keep it here in blog and add link to this blog in author notes? Also, your advices and opinions are most welcome.

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May
15th
2016

Twiny's unintentional trick. · 12:56am May 15th, 2016

I just realized that Twilight jumping into Gilda's throat in chapter 5 part 2 and next teleporting outside is similar to trick Trixie performed in season 6 episode 6. (Instead of normal sized unicorn shoting herself into manticore's mouth and teleporting out, it was tiny sized unicorn jumping into griffon's stomach).

What do you guys think? Was this at least a bit similar?

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