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CommanderX5


Dec
17th
2019

Improving Little Lost Pikachu, I need your feedback. · 9:03am Dec 17th, 2019

Greetings loyal fans of this series. I wanted to inform you all that since this series is comming to an end, I decided to listen to DJSkywalker feedback and together with him fix the more controvertial and less enjoyable part of "Little Lost Pikachu" so I can close this series without any regrets.

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Aug
27th
2019

A request. · 8:39am Aug 27th, 2019

Hello everyone.

This is unusual of me, but I was asked to spread this message:

3phantoms

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Aug
13th
2019

Your favorite Twiny's feat? · 8:25am Aug 13th, 2019

Hello everyone.

As you all know, Twiny ended up enjoying the challenging life in the giant world as she constantly pushed her limits, both magical and physical, which means that despite her miniscule size she managed to do some impressive feats.

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Feb
3rd
2019

Sequel is up · 12:02pm Feb 3rd, 2019

In short, "A Little Adveture in Alola" has been uploaded. Depending if it will perform well enough to become a story on its own (upvote/downvote ratio, feedback, fave number), I will either:
Upload epilogue to Little Lost Pikachu with link to the sequel.
or
Remove "A Little Adventure in Alola" and continued "Little Lost Pikachu" (though personally I think it will be way less fitting).

Hope the sequel will succed this time.

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Jan
13th
2019

Sequel title voting. · 7:58pm Jan 13th, 2019

To all fans of Little Lost Raichu and Little Lost Pikachu, I plan to give it a try and post the part of the story that takes place after Twilight open portal to pokemon world as a sequel. (Hopefully this adventurous aproach with bigger stakes will hold well as its own story).

So far Little Lost Pikachu held slice of life formula with minimal stakes, well, this is about to change.

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Aug
4th
2018

The sequel is up · 1:29pm Aug 4th, 2018

And so Little Lost Raichu has come to an end and Little Lost Pikachu is up and running.

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Jun
12th
2018

Sequel Candeled. "Little Lost Raichu" continue. · 9:15am Jun 12th, 2018

Greetings my faithful readers.

After some thinking and checking the feedback, I decided that the sequel "Raichu, Defender of Equestria" can't exacly stand as it's own story, nor as a sequel.

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Jun
11th
2018

I need your Feedback. · 12:36am Jun 11th, 2018

Alright, here's the situation.

Beacuse Nica's time in Equestira made a shift into an adventure with big stakes, and since the main story was already very long, I wrote a sequel "Raichu, Defender of Equestira."

Considering 45 upvotes/3 downvotes ratio, low feedback and the fact that prologue in the sequel I added in hope it will explain the situation to new readers is also epilogue of the main story, (and may not be the best way to start a story), I feel a bit conflicted.

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Jun
9th
2018

Ask Nica (roleplaying blog) · 10:38pm Jun 9th, 2018

Alright, so here's the deal. While writting my tiny Twilight series, to celebrate 1000 likes on my Celestia's Tiny Student story, I wrote a blog called "Ask Twiny Sparkle"

While "Lost Little Raichu" is waaaay less popular, I still would like giving try to something similiar.

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May
27th
2018

Final Feedback - Lost Little Raichu · 5:46pm May 27th, 2018

Considering that the story "Lost Little Raichu" is going to an end (the next chapter will be an Epilogue with link to the sequel), I would like to ask as follow:

After reading this story from prologue to chapter 25, is there anything in your opinion that can be improved before we move into the sequel?

Is there any chapter that seemed flawed/out of place that the story would benefit greatly if improved?

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