Improving Little Lost Pikachu, I need your feedback.

Greetings loyal fans of this series. I wanted to inform you all that since this series is comming to an end, I decided to listen to DJSkywalker feedback and together with him fix the more controvertial and less enjoyable part of "Little Lost Pikachu" so I can close this series without any regrets.

In here is first alternative change involving Nica/Pikachu philosophical exchange. Since original felt a bit too one-sided in Nica's favor, this one takes more balanced aproach and cuts away some unnecesery lines. It also redirect a bit of Pikachu's flaw from his dislike to his evolution to pride instead.

Chapter 3 part 3 alternative version.

I'll leave a comment which you can upvote if you like this alternative over the original, or downvote if you prefer the original. Depending on voting I will replace the original chapter with this one, or remove this alternative.

The next thing we're working on is Nica/Pikachu fight. Our alternative idea is to have Pikachu refuse magical boost due to his pride and Nica refusing to fight him because of that. In the end Ninetales will fight Pikachu instead. As for Nica/Pikachu fight, we'll relocate it towards the end of the story before the epilogue with some significant changes. We hope that those changes will make "Little Lost Pikachu" more enjoyable and fix the issues that many of you had, which is why I ask for your vote and your feedback.

The part that we worked on is marked in bold.

While most of the events in Little Lost Pikachu will remain unchanged, your feedback and voting will decide which Nica/Pikachu philosophical and combat interaction will remain cannon, so I strongly encourage you to compare original and alterantive so we all can look back on this story as more enjoyable with less flaws holding it down).

Cheers.