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  • Saturday
    Nica Fanart

    Hello everyone.

    PLukol draw a scene from my story and I wish to share it with all of you.

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    1 comments · 137 views
  • 10 weeks
    Chapter 18,5/19 final improvements

    Hello everyone.

    So long story short, I finished last changes to "Little Lost Pikachu."

    In chapter 18,5 I added additional scene in the end (which I marked in bold), and I changed chapter 6 - Honor and Respect to Chapter 19.

    While changes in Pikachu vs Nica battle were minor, at the end of chapter 19 part 2 I made significant changes and also marked in bold.

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    0 comments · 233 views
  • 10 weeks
    Chapter 8 improved. Need your voting and feedback.

    Hello everyone.

    As you already noticed, together with DJskywalker we have been trying to improve "Little Lost Pikachu" by changing some more controvertial chapters. The first change was Pikachu/Nica's talk about their believes.
    Next one was Pikachu fighting Ninetales instead.

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    0 comments · 55 views
  • 12 weeks
    Ninetales vs Pikachu, needs your voting

    Hello everyone. The massive change for "Little Lost Pikachu" that we worked on is finally here, and I need your votes to determine if it improve the story and should be added, or is it better to keep the story as it is.

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    0 comments · 170 views
  • 14 weeks
    Improving Little Lost Pikachu, I need your feedback.

    Greetings loyal fans of this series. I wanted to inform you all that since this series is comming to an end, I decided to listen to DJSkywalker feedback and together with him fix the more controvertial and less enjoyable part of "Little Lost Pikachu" so I can close this series without any regrets.

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Jan
13th
2019

Sequel title voting. · 7:58pm Jan 13th, 2019

To all fans of Little Lost Raichu and Little Lost Pikachu, I plan to give it a try and post the part of the story that takes place after Twilight open portal to pokemon world as a sequel. (Hopefully this adventurous aproach with bigger stakes will hold well as its own story).

So far Little Lost Pikachu held slice of life formula with minimal stakes, well, this is about to change.

I came up with some title ideas for the sequel, and I want to ask you all to vote on those titles in the comment section or maybe suggest your own.

Title list:
Battle for Alola
Magical Duo and Chu Brigade
Alola Final Stand
A Little Adventure in Alola
Twilight’s Team and the Chu Brigade
Little Lost Chu Brigade

Thanks in advance.

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Comments ( 9 )

If you like title: "Battle for Alola" Upvote this comment. If you dislike it, downvote it.

If you like title: "Magical Duo and Chu Brigade" Upvote this comment. If you dislike it, downvote it.

If you like title: "Alola Final Stand" Upvote this comment. If you dislike it, downvote it.

If you like title: "A Little Adventure in Alola" Upvote this comment. If you dislike it, downvote it.

If you like title: "Twilight’s Team and the Chu Brigade" Upvote this comment. If you dislike it, downvote it.

If you like title: "Little Lost Chu Brigade" Upvote this comment. If you dislike it, downvote it.

For this I kind of believe we would need a brief summary of what would happen to properly give this a title

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I wish I could say more, but this would be spoiling. All I can say is that the sequel with have adventure tag instead of "slice of life" tag and no comedy tag. While in Little Lost Pikachu the stakes were low (with the part in the Everfree Forest being the only exception), in the sequel skills and teamwork of ponies and pokemon will be pushed to their limits.

All I can say is that a lot has happened since the time when Ash, Astra and Emily's team was suck into MLP world. A saying "when cat is missing, mice have fun" perfectly explain it.

Wonder if the portal will lead to an alternate Pokemon World :p

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