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  • 165 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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    2 comments · 1,199 views
  • 193 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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    1 comments · 746 views
  • 193 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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    4 comments · 458 views
  • 193 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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    6 comments · 340 views
  • 198 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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Aug
4th
2018

The sequel is up · 1:29pm Aug 4th, 2018

And so Little Lost Raichu has come to an end and Little Lost Pikachu is up and running.

You all have been there seeing Nica come to Equestira with an important mission, only for her memories to be sealed away as she forgot about her past and all her powers. You all watched her struggle as she tried to adapt to her new enviroment and re-learn how to use her powers. The dream scenes showed most important points of Nica's past and what made her into a powerful, extremely durable and skilled but also flawed character. Her kind and self-less nature also overwhelmed by humility and self-inflicted pain.

You all read about how her efforts were essential in stopping Equestira from being taken over and the struggles and suffering for Nica that came with it.

Now with Nica's character and her backstory being estabilished, the sequel will focus on Nica's idol ending up in Equestira alongside many other pokemon. This story will focus on those elements:
1) Nica interacting with the very idol she always admired but never got to meet.
2) Her character development as she will be forced to face her flaws head-on.
3) Ash and Astra's pokemon were summoned into the pony world, so you get to know Astra's team better and also how Ash's pokemon will interact with them and the ponies.
4) This story will be mostly shown from the eyes of Nica's idol and his interaction with her and the ponies.

Whle I understand that reading such a loooong story, you all may feel a bit tired, but if you can fave/bookshelf/upvote/track the sequel as well. I can quarantee you will not regret it.

here is the link - Little Lost Pikachu

I will update this sequel (1 chapter per weak) unless the chapters will be really long.

Cheers.

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