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  • 6 days
    Nica Fanart

    Hello everyone.

    PLukol draw a scene from my story and I wish to share it with all of you.

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    1 comments · 189 views
  • 11 weeks
    Chapter 18,5/19 final improvements

    Hello everyone.

    So long story short, I finished last changes to "Little Lost Pikachu."

    In chapter 18,5 I added additional scene in the end (which I marked in bold), and I changed chapter 6 - Honor and Respect to Chapter 19.

    While changes in Pikachu vs Nica battle were minor, at the end of chapter 19 part 2 I made significant changes and also marked in bold.

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    0 comments · 236 views
  • 11 weeks
    Chapter 8 improved. Need your voting and feedback.

    Hello everyone.

    As you already noticed, together with DJskywalker we have been trying to improve "Little Lost Pikachu" by changing some more controvertial chapters. The first change was Pikachu/Nica's talk about their believes.
    Next one was Pikachu fighting Ninetales instead.

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    0 comments · 55 views
  • 13 weeks
    Ninetales vs Pikachu, needs your voting

    Hello everyone. The massive change for "Little Lost Pikachu" that we worked on is finally here, and I need your votes to determine if it improve the story and should be added, or is it better to keep the story as it is.

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    0 comments · 170 views
  • 15 weeks
    Improving Little Lost Pikachu, I need your feedback.

    Greetings loyal fans of this series. I wanted to inform you all that since this series is comming to an end, I decided to listen to DJSkywalker feedback and together with him fix the more controvertial and less enjoyable part of "Little Lost Pikachu" so I can close this series without any regrets.

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Aug
4th
2018

The sequel is up · 1:29pm Aug 4th, 2018

And so Little Lost Raichu has come to an end and Little Lost Pikachu is up and running.

You all have been there seeing Nica come to Equestira with an important mission, only for her memories to be sealed away as she forgot about her past and all her powers. You all watched her struggle as she tried to adapt to her new enviroment and re-learn how to use her powers. The dream scenes showed most important points of Nica's past and what made her into a powerful, extremely durable and skilled but also flawed character. Her kind and self-less nature also overwhelmed by humility and self-inflicted pain.

You all read about how her efforts were essential in stopping Equestira from being taken over and the struggles and suffering for Nica that came with it.

Now with Nica's character and her backstory being estabilished, the sequel will focus on Nica's idol ending up in Equestira alongside many other pokemon. This story will focus on those elements:
1) Nica interacting with the very idol she always admired but never got to meet.
2) Her character development as she will be forced to face her flaws head-on.
3) Ash and Astra's pokemon were summoned into the pony world, so you get to know Astra's team better and also how Ash's pokemon will interact with them and the ponies.
4) This story will be mostly shown from the eyes of Nica's idol and his interaction with her and the ponies.

Whle I understand that reading such a loooong story, you all may feel a bit tired, but if you can fave/bookshelf/upvote/track the sequel as well. I can quarantee you will not regret it.

here is the link - Little Lost Pikachu

I will update this sequel (1 chapter per weak) unless the chapters will be really long.

Cheers.

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