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This story is a sequel to Little Lost Raichu


It has been over a month since Nica woke up in the Everfree Forest, lost and devoid of memories of her past. Twilight and her friends accepted her, nursed back to health, fed her and provided her with a place to live, and she put her own life on the line to protect them.

Now with more pokemon being summoned into Equestria and Twilight researching a way to send them back, Ash’s Pikachu finds himself lost in a dangerous forest far away from his home. How will he react to the residents of this new world and their culture? And how will he react to a kind female Raichu who wish for nothing more than to make his stay as memorable and pleasant as possible, showing him the kindness that the ponies showed her.

Will their friendship bloom as Nica shows him the wonders and magic of Equestria and introduce to befriended ponies, or will their clashing ideologies and Pikachu’s competitive spirit towards his evolution lead to awkward situations and get in the way? Only time will tell.

PS: Reading prequel is not needed to understand this story, but I encourage to check it for those who want to learn more about Nica, her backstory and her time in Equestria.

Proof-readers:
Jay Tarrant - Thanks for full and passionate proof-read of the entire story.

"Georg" - Thanks for improving Prologue and chapter 1, as well as small improvements of random scenes in the story.

DrakeSlayer Thanks for pre-reading it prologue and chapter 1.

And special thanks to UnknownGiggs for extremely detailed proof-reading of the later part of the story, you have a lot of talent when it comes to proof-reading.

Chapters (43)
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Comments ( 797 )

This is a good start. I really hope Pinkie has some Pokémon that is in full sync with her. Also, if we're doing Sun and Moon in the Pokémon anime, I'm betting Lillie's Vulpix would be great to get along with Fluttershy….oh, and Team Rocket's Mimikyu would be great with Rainbow since she would hate to admit that she could be frightened by the thing.

Now Ash's Pikachu entered Equestria and joined Nica and the others? :rainbowhuh:


I'm loving this sequel already! :pinkiehappy:

While it could be cute that Pikachu and Nica get together, they have different trainers and lives.

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Why I fear Meowth falling in a portal?

I am surprised that Pikachu didn't insult Meowth when he got the collar. I mean he gave up on his species signature move Pay Day to speak the human tounge. Still let's see how Nica reacts when she finds out just who she has met.

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I may consider uploading one extra chapter tomorrow, but I make no promisses.

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I suppose Lillie's Vulpix is not a strech as she could be playing with Ash's pokemon on the beach when the summoning took place. (Originally I didn't think of that).

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Thank you. I hope not to disapoint.

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No need to make assumptions just yet. I am trying to make interaction between ponies and pokemon as natural as possible (this involve Nica and Pikachu). Considering that Pikachu was never interested in having very close relationship with another pokemon, I wouldn't hold hopes up if I were you.

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It must have been a very old episode. Care to explain in greater detail why Pikachu would be cusing Meowth when he got his translating collar?

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Nope. The summoning took place a bit ealier before Litten evolved. When exactly you will find out in due time.

So we now have members of Nica's team and Ash's team in Equestria, along with Suiren's (Lana in English) Popplio. And given that our spunky Alolan fire-cat is still only a Litten and Ash has his Dusk Lycanroc, we can safely assume this takes place sometime between episodes 37 (where Rockruff evolves) and 63 (where Litten evolves) of the Sun/Moon anime series. Still, this proves to be just as entertaining as the previous tale, and I'm looking forward to more of it with all the excitement as before. :twilightsmile:

Prediction time! When Pikachu finds out who Nica is, he's going to reveal that she's his idol. Mutual hero worship!

I like Ash's Pikachu's personality.

Rarity with Starmie and Litten is hilarious.

Comment posted by CommanderX5 deleted August 4th

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we can safely assume this takes place sometime between episodes 37 (where Rockruff evolves) and 63 (where Litten evolves) of the Sun/Moon anime series.

You aren't wrong.

Still, this proves to be just as entertaining as the previous tale, and I'm looking forward to more of it with all the excitement as before.

Thanks. I hope I won't disapoint your expectations.

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Prediction time! When Pikachu finds out who Nica is, he's going to reveal that she's his idol. Mutual hero worship!

Interesting theory, though it will take some chapters before you'll find out if your theory was correct or not.

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I like Ash's Pikachu's personality.

You mean in the pokemon anime, or rather the way I write Pikachu in my story?

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Rarity with Starmie and Litten is hilarious.

Thanks. Though I fear Litten isn't going to stay with Rarity, not after his humiliation and Opal's shows of affection.

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I like Ash's Pikachu's personality.

You mean in the pokemon anime, or rather the way I write Pikachu in my story?

Both of course.

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Just out of curiosity. If you had to chose between Ash's Pikachu and Nica, who do you like more as a character (personality, achievements, morals, strengths and weaknesses and more) ?

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Probably Nica. She reminds me of a better adjusted Shirou Emiya from Fate/Stay Night.

Nah, the pacing is a bit too quick for my tastes. Good luck, though.

I’m NOT surprised that Ash’s Pikachu has an insanely high special attack stat, which explains how he’s able to send Team Rocket flying so many times. Also, Ash in Sun and Moon looks waay younger compared to X and Y.

I am excited at Reading this sequel, I knew you would have to involve Ash Ketchum or his Pokémon in some way what with it being a Raichu and now a Pikachu in the story.

I get the impression that tree-related decorations are a repetitive treant inside this castle.

You mean trend, right?

She pointed at the ceiling. <There’s also a fountain on the roof of this castle with a few sunbeds, a really nice spot to relax under the sun or to practice jumping.>

A place for optimal chillaxing, as Rainbow Dash would put it.
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“W-wait… so those tattoos… are cutie marks?” Pikachu pointed at filly’s flank. “And they magically appear when you learn what you’re good at?” Upon seeing a nod, Pikachu closed his eyes and massaged his forehead. “Merely thinking about the rules of this crazy world brought me nothing but headache.”

My suggestion: don't question it. You only get a bigger headache and you STILL won't get it.

Hay, featured!!!!
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Even Pokemon couldn't escape Rarity's Fashion Inspiring Moment. :rainbowlaugh:

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Well, if you picked a time in between, then OK. I just thought you forgot about Torracat.

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Well, a certain Buneary comes to mind. X))

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Pikachu has never been a worshipper. He respects his Pokemon teammates, and those, who are strong, but he never worshipped anyone. And more, he likely never heard of Astra and Nica. He might BECOME respectful, but not more.

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Nah, the pacing is a bit too quick for my tastes. Good luck, though.

I admit that the pacing is a bit quick in chapter 1 since Pikachu is in a hurry to find his friends, but it will slow down once the feeling of urgency for Pikachu will be over.

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I’m NOT surprised that Ash’s Pikachu has an insanely high special attack stat, which explains how he’s able to send Team Rocket flying so many times

To be fair, Ash's Pikachu doesn't only have a lot of raw power but also a lot of durability. Considering Pikachu's base stats and how vunerable he should be, Ash's Pikachu can sometime take as much beating as Snorlax if not more (though sometmes his durability gets really low for no reason, it just a bit).

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Fixed, thanks.

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A place for optimal chillaxing, as Rainbow Dash would put it.

True, but I think NIca is more interested in it being the highest spot in Ponyville, allowing her to jump down to the ground and then back onto that high spot.

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My suggestion: don't question it. You only get a bigger headache and you STILL won't get it.

Good advice. I bet Pikchu will need to use it very soon for the sake of his own sanity.

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Even Pokemon couldn't escape Rarity's Fashion Inspiring Moment.

True, but unlike Starmie and Nica (who can stand still for hours and have patience for it), for Litten it must have been a nightmare. Pikachu is lucky he won't get to experience this for himself.

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And more, he likely never heard of Astra and Nica. He might BECOME respectful, but not more.

Your theory have greater chance of being correct considering Pikachu's character. As for now, lets just wait to see what happens.

Oh it’s nice to read and see a new chapter so soon.

I have enjoyed it so far, especially the reactions between the different Pokémon and Ponies.

It would be fun to see in a future chapter where Twilight tries a test portal to make sure it leads to the Pokémon world only to end up with one leading to the Mystery Dungeon Dimension.

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2: Most likely.
3: I still forsee a bunch of aspirin (or something to that effect) being taken anyway.

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You really think he's never heard of the Pokemon Master and her partner?

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Well, I have never taken Ash to follow on news of where he isn't. He's only ever informed of champions and elites in the area where he plans on or already goes to. So I would think that he doesn't know that there is a trainer, defeating every elite left and right in areas he left. He usually takes information on "need-to-know" basis. And Pikachu is likely the same.

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I have enjoyed it so far, especially the reactions between the different Pokémon and Ponies.

Well, another chapter is up ( in this case it is part 2 of chapter 1)

If you like interaction between ponies and pokemon, tell me what you think about that one that is in part 2.

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You really think he's never heard of the Pokemon Master and her partner?

Considering that he learn about elites and champions from others on the get go, it makes sense he doesn't know anything about current Pokemon Master (even if he wants to become one). And Astra prefered if the one she admires wouldn't learn about her (in the end she is the final obstacle in her hero's ambition and prefer to stay out of his picture.)

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Exacly.

Also, I decided to sqeaze extra chapter this weekend. Enjoy.

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I think Pikcahu's stats are ARTIFICIAL. He had an accident in the early part of their journey, where he became overcharged for the first time. Not sure what to take as the overcharge, I think the thunder strike, when he and Ash were fleeing Fearow and Spearow flock. Or recharge at the Pokemon Center, where they went. Not sure. I mean, Team Rocket stated that it was THE most powerful Pikachu they have ever seen. Or that at the beginning of their another journey he was magnetised by an electronic magnet, and was unable to release the voltage. He became delirious, and standart lab gear of Professor Birch was fried, while he attempted to cure Pikachu. T.R.'s contraption, which was stated to take in whatever voltage Pikachu had and work couldn't do it. It's capacity was fully charged in a minute, and Pikachu had his "regular" strength to add to it. Which made it explode.

Little Foxie gone and Little Kitten stay with Pinkie.

I wonder how much philosophy could Twilight and Ninetales talk.

As he felt his tail and ear being pulled in opposite direction while watching those large heads with tiny eyes, and those little limbs, a simple question was born in his mind. What have I gotten myself into?

Well, you already missed your chance to object, so deal with it. :moustache:

Oh dear. Litten, you just messed up my friend. You do not want to stay with that.

“Oh, hello Nica, how are you doing? Have you came to get some of my sweets into your cute hungry belly?” Pinkie asked as she stood on her rear hooves, standing behind the counter. “Or maybe you’re here to treat your friends over here.

Nica nodded. “They are! Pinkie, meet Pikachu and Litten." She pointed at the pokemon behind her. "I promised them to help them find their friends while showing them around, and I also thought your delicious, marvelous sweets will make them happier.”

that I would help them

“Straw...berries? I don’t think there are berries of such a name where we come from,” Pikachu pointed out.

Hmm... How to put it in Pokemon terms?

It looks like a Pecha Berry, has the colour of a Haban Berry.

9090543 I’m guessing his second highest stat would either be defense or special defense? Don’t forget that he’s still vulnerable to Ground types.

Pikachu rubbed the top of his head. “I wonder, is her special ability levitate? She doesn’t have wings after all, and what’s up with her silent teleporting?”

I thought her special ability was Confuse. :ajsmug:

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I’m guessing his second highest stat would either be defense or special defense? Don’t forget that he’s still vulnerable to Ground types.

Pikachu actually handled ground attacks just fine. He even had a ground/dark type rival and defeated him (Krokodile was it).
Personally, I think he have extremely high hp, so even with limited defense and sp.defense, he can still take lots of beating. But yeah, Ash Pikachu's base stats are extremely high for his species, he's pokemon mascoth after all.

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I wonder how much philosophy could Twilight and Ninetales talk.

Whatever they talk about, I am sure they are going to enjoy it.

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Well, you already missed your chance to object, so deal with it.

Eeyup. :eeyup:

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He have no choice. He needs to adapt.

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I think ability like that wasn't developed yet.

Litten smiled nervously as he ended up being levitated by the little pony, noticing a magical aura around filly’s horn. The following double hug proved somewhat uncomfortable. For such a young pony with wings, he sure has lots of strength.

That's what comes with being born of two Earth Ponies, i suppose.

Then again, a lot of babies are surprisingly strong.

Not a bad chapter, not as hilarious as the last one but still nice.

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Pikachu and Litten were in Alola before being pulled where they are. No excuse, in my eyes.

You have to have pikachu kick that ninetales butt.

9090866 True, but Pikachu got most of his stats from battles.

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Not a bad chapter, not as hilarious as the last one but still nice.

I can't promise all chapters will be as funny, but I will try to keep the cuteness and nice character interactions.

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You have to have pikachu kick that ninetales butt.

Keep in mind that this Ninetales is part of Astra's team, a very powerful trainers with 8 years of experience (and NInetales belonged to Astra's mother before, so he have a lot of experience). In other words, Pikachu can not simply win with skills and experience, because his opponent fought hard battles more years than he did. Aside that, Ninetales is a fully evolved pokemon, giving him a big advantage. Do not imidedly assume Pikachu would emerge victorious. Ninetales may seem arrogant, but he have power to back it up. He is in a big league.

Looks like Pikachu and Litten are in good hooves.

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