ELittle Lost Raichu
MLP: FiM
Pokémon
Slice of Life
Devoid of memories and found in the Everfree Forest, little Raichu is nursed back to health by Twilight and her friends. Little do they know about the importance of her past and how far she’ll go to repay their kindness.
Crossover
Twilight
OC
Main 6
Starlight Glimmer
CommanderX5 · 245k words · 778 20 · 13k views

More Blog Posts42

164 weeks
Sweetolebob18 injury

Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.
I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.
Read More
2 comments · 1,198 views
192 weeks
Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.
It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:
Scene one:
Read More
1 comments · 744 views
193 weeks
Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.
Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.
Added scene is marked in bold:
Read More
4 comments · 457 views
193 weeks
Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

Hello everyone.
Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.
Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:
Read More
6 comments · 340 views
197 weeks
I appologize for the delay in updating

Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"
I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.
Read More
0 comments · 315 views

Jun

12th

2018

Sequel Candeled. "Little Lost Raichu" continue. · 9:15am Jun 12th, 2018

Greetings my faithful readers.

After some thinking and checking the feedback, I decided that the sequel "Raichu, Defender of Equestria" can't exacly stand as it's own story, nor as a sequel.

It's true that it have more dark and adventurous aproach, but in the end it feels too much like a direct continuation of events of this story rather than a sequel, so I decided to merge both stories. (I came up with a way better idea for the sequel called "Little Lost Pikachu" which will take place one week after events of this story, so removing "Raichu, Defender of Equestria" seems like the best course of action).

One of the reasons I split it into sequel was due to this story already being super long. I hope that number of chapters won't scare new readers.

I appologise for the confusion and from now on I'll keep updating this "Little Lost Raichu" instead.

Report CommanderX5 · 731 views · Story: Little Lost Raichu ·

Comments ( 4 )