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LoveandEdify


Keep Loving, Keep Edifying, Keep LoveandEdifying

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Twilight Sparkle has been your best friend ever since you got transported into the magical world of Equestria, and you’ve enjoyed your adventures and misadventures alike ever since deciding to stay in Equestria for good. However, one day, when you witness another Twilighting episode intended for the other members of the Mane 6, you can’t help but wonder, as Twilight’s friend, are you really worthy to be friends with the Princess of Friendship?

(Now, a One-Shot Series :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:)

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Comments ( 21 )

So Agent Fluffy, what do you think? 🤞🤞🤞🙏🙏🙏

I really liked this, it was really sweet, and really showed off a vulnerable, compassionate side to Twilight

🥰 :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, that’s one of the things I was aiming for in this story.

Fun fact: this story was inspired by the story of a song by Macklemore called “Shadow”. The song is basically about a man struggling with the guilt of his failures and his struggles to fight through them. The story was almost called “Running From Your Shadows” for that very reason because that was what I wanted readers to take away from the story. That you can’t run from your problems, someone’s always gonna find out.

I’ve always planned this story to be read from a Reader POV to help them learn this lesson; but now that I read this from Twilight’s perspective (despite me intentionally leaving some of it out for brevity), I realize where you're coming from when it comes to Twilight being a lot more vulnerable and compassionate. The arc I wanted to go for Twilight was to focus more on how she tries to make things right when it all comes down to it and friendships are at stake.

There might be a sequel to just this story alone, but I have Waxing and Waning to work on too.

Plus another series which has a TBD release date.

Thanks for the comment.

Keep Loving, Keep Edifying, Keep LoveandEdifying. :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

--LoveandEdify

I’m honestly surprised by the lack of attention this story has, it was great 👍

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Yeah, I came into this one with (obviously) good expectations; but since this was one of my “test the waters” story for this site (along with A Song Worth Singing), I didn’t expect too much.

This story was designed to be a one-shot of part of a series I’m working on, but I could possibly make a post-proposal chapter too. I’ve just been swamped as of late.

Starting a new job tomorrow, got an EQG story to write, got the second one-shot of the Friendship Series (or, whatever anyone thinks I should call this... IT'S A WORKING TITLE!!!), I have other works on other sites to finish/update, and I’m also proofreading MixA4's awesome story called You Did Something To Make Her Love You (which is another great read you should check out).

Anyway, glad you enjoyed this story. Thanks for the encouraging words.

Here’s some for you, especially in the midst of all the chaos right now.

Keep Loving, Keep Edifying and KEEP LOVEANDEDIFYING!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

--LoveandEdify

This is cute. Deserves more attention than its getting.

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Ditto. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

If you like this one, then you’ll be pleased to hear that this is Part One off an entire series (read the Author’s Notes for details)

Be sure to read the second story of The Friendship Series; Waxing and Waning for more fun like this.

I’ve got another nice little surprise for this story coming soon. :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

(Update: It’s here now!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:)

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The site says it can't find that story. :duck:

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This story was a nice surprise. So was Twilight proposing, first time I've ever read a story that did that.

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Oh right.

I haven't published that one yet.

I've been working on a My Hero Academia fanfic for Quotev. Thanks for reminding me though. Glad you liked the story. :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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I've been watching that anime. :twilightsmile: love it.

I just realized that you have your text illigned in the center. It should be to the left, its proper. Just some food for thought.

What if you gave all of you that you could possibly give; yet it still not be enough?

When I read this line in particular, I felt a tugging in my chest. A year ago I lived in an abusive household. No matter what I did, it was never enough. I was constantly getting berated. You don't bring in enough money (I give you every cent I make), you don't do enough around the house (I cleaned every room in the house. What did you do), you have to cancel your doctor's appointment and babysit so we can run all over bum fucked Egypt (does my health mean nothing). You get the point. I'm sorry for rambling here, but after reading that line I needed to get this off my chest, even if no one reads it.

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Awwww... :fluttershysad::fluttershysad::heart::heart:

I'm so sorry you had to go through all that.

Sometimes we run into those people who have standards so ridiculously high that no one can seem to touch them.

It's not that we don't try, neither that we don't care about them, but if they seem to be asking for something more; is it ever going to be truly enough?

I'm not a licensed therapist and don't have a full idea of what you're going through, but I hope that you at least saw something in my work that gave you hope. That even though there are people who have ridiculously impossible standards, there are ones who care deeply enough about you to allow you to just try and understand when things don't work out.

But also, people who truly care, will adjust their standards. Not always lower them, because they also have their own limits, but will adjust them so that things can be made right again. So that everything will indeed be, Fully Healed. :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

Keep Loving, Keep Edifying, Keep LoveandEdifying.

--LoveandEdify

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Thank you. Not only did your story help me, but your response to my comment did as well. Be a licensed therapist isn't always necessary. Sometimes all it takes is just a close friend, or (such as what you did for me) a stranger with a heart of gold. Someone who wants to help someone who is feeling down. So thank you again LoveandEdify. You are an amazing person.

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No problem.

Just so you know, I also write stories on Quotev as well.

If you want to find out more about those stories, I have a link for you write (pun intended) here: My Quotev Account

Anyway, I hope you continue to feel better soon and that everything becomes more favorable.

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Ya still writing bonus chapters for this story? Or shall it forever remain on a cliffhanger?

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I'm currently working on a big My Hero Academia fanfiction project on Quotev: Steel Resolve

Got one more chapter to go on that, and then I'm going to finish what may/may not be the final bonus chapter of this story (depending on how the fans react)

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