When Twilight first came to Ponyville, Pinkie-Pie knew that there would be yet another awesomtasicular friend for her to meet; but she never expected to find love. Nope, not just the Hearts-and Hooves Day love; but real, honest and genuine love. 
This makes Pinkie-Pie VERY happy.
Well, except for the fact she found out that Spike was in love with Rarity... and it’s the only thing that makes her very unhappy... and the fact that she rarely brings it up in order to be strong to her friends...
(Submission for the Right Back It Again: 2020 Shipping Contest)
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Well... this is a couple i never thought i’d ship together. Well done 👍
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You think that’s a good one; check out All The Small Things: by Closer-To-The-Sun
That was a major inspiration for this story; and making a PinkieSpike story in general.
This was sweet.
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Not really a sweat. More like sweet.
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Yeah, bad spelling.
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It’s fine. Glad you enjoyed the story.
You used center orientation for all your paragraphs, instead of having all lines start on the left-hand side.
Since pretty much everyone has grown up their whole lives reading with a left-indention orientation, this made your story very hard to read and painful on the eyes. The viewers' eyes naturally want to go back to the far left when they're done with a line. Stopping halfway there feels unnatural.
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I’ve had different writers tell me different things over my writing years.
When I’m on Fanfiction.net, usually everyone does it in center-style. And when I've tried left-paragraph style in the past, it actually looked even worse.
I might adjust it when Right Back it Again 2020 Shipping Contest is over, if at all. But thanks for your opinion.
Everyone has their preferences. I actually enjoy the style and this is my first time really paying attention to it.
Fun Fact: Unconditional was inspired by this song by Katy Perry, as well as All The Small Things: by Closer-To-The-Sun
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I hardly ever see stories on Fanfiction.net that are center-aligned. Almost all of them are left-aligned.
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Maybe so, but I’ve also had font issues on here in the past and I've decided to stick with what I’ve known until I figured it out.
So, did I lose this competition? Am I not moving on?
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Regardless of any decision we've made, the story being center-aligned wouldn't impact that. Yours was still a fun and enjoyable read :)
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Thank you so very much.
debo decir, que fue una linda historia... me gusto la manera que describiste la manera que pinkie soportaba ver a su "flechazo" estar interesado en otra pony... por cierto no te molestaría si traduzco y comparto tu fic en mis cuentas?? te prometo mencionarte...
I must say, it was a nice story... I liked the way you described the way that Pinkie endured seeing her "crush" being interested in another pony... By the way, you wouldn't mind if I translated and shared your fic on my accounts ?? I promise to mention you...