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One night, just a few days before Princess Twilight Sparkle's coronation as ruler of Equestria, Prince Alfred summons Princess Luna at the "Castle of The Two Sisters" for a delicate talk with her; this would be the last night he would have lied to her since what she deserves is only the truth.
Part of the "Alfredverse".
Special thanks to Player 4 for helping with a few ideas and concepts for this story.
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Very nice, great work!
10351702
Really?
Beautiful fic! the truth, despite having been written in two hours is very well done
. I hate to admit it, but I'm a long way from being able to write a fic like this in such a short time, in fact it would take me weeks
. I am terrible
10351704
Yeah, i love how you showed Luna's struggle. It also reminds me of a Story of a Friend
10351706
Thank you so much!
10351705
I am also surprised at how well it ended, despite me being tired at the last minutes while writing it.
10351709
You're Welcome. And if you are interested, i give you the Link to the Story of My Friend.
Was also why i mentioned the stallion, as i misunderstood your blog, that you looked for an oc for it
Aw, that was sweet. I honestly feel as though this could be stretched out to form a whole story, either a sequel or prequel. Nicely done!
Hey, thanks for the shoutout! Glad I was able to help!
Given the "Sad" tag, it will take me a while to get to this story, but I have it in my notes to make sure I don't forget about it!
10355352
Well, you helped me, what I did was just a gesture of thanks towards you for helping me.
10351750
Well, your prediction has been correct since now there's a sequel and a prequel!
10393460
I will get right on reading those then!
10393629
So, how are those stories? "A Heart's Warming Eve Gift" and "The Weeping Winter"?
10396981
I enjoyed The Weeping Winter. As it was a prequel, I thought it was best to start with that.
10396998
And, don't worry, because more stories will come!
10397000
Nice! I'd love to see more of Alfred and Luna's relationship
10397002
I have some ideas and concepts, I just need creativity, imagination, and inspiration to write those stories.
10397046
Ah, the big three. Those can be difficult at times. Trust me, I know.
10397055
Oh, so you know them, huh?
10397057
That I do. They are one thing if you're doing a one-shot but are much more difficult if you're doing a multiple story-spanning epic like I am.
10397061
Yeah. You know, all this started as a vague idea in the middle of the night after having played some Halo 3: ODST songs from the soundtrack. Now? Well... It's becoming a whole universe.
10397069
Huh, well what do you know. Still, I'm glad to hear that there's more
10397076
I don't promise a sequel to the prequel soon, but I'm already planning it and several other stories. However, I'll need an editor. Unfortunately, AmaranthineDream is occupied and we can't collaborate by now, so... I'm a little stuck right now.
10397077
I'd help you out myself if I wasn't busy with my own projects. I could ask around
10397083
I should need someone with enough knowledge about what happened (canonically) during the Pre-Equestrian Era and the millennium between Luna's banishment and Nightmare Moon's defeat.
10397083
And that doesn't ask any money since I have almost none.
10397086
I'd do it for free but like I said, I have a lot of work on my plate.
10397092
If you want, you can work with me. However, we'll both have to wait since I have school work and other things to do.
10397095
Okay sounds good! I'm currently working on All Hail Midnight Sparkle! and I'm halfway through it
10397099
Don't worry, I can wait.
I like the idea, toward the end it kind of made me start to feel like crying. Though it didnt really reel me in with this little bit.
Hiya,
So, I was looking over your story A Heart's Warming Eve Gift to review it when I saw that it was listed as a sequel. I thought I'd come check this out first. It seems you've set up a whole universe. I do certainly enjoy some continuity. However, I'll leave the choice up to you.
If you'd prefer, I can review your story without reading the others if you're concerned at all about whether it stands on its own. Or I can read up on this universe for the review. As I said, your choice.
Either way, I look forward to checking out more of your stories.
Have a great day.
10710269
Why thank you so much.
I would like for you to review it first as a lone story and if it stands perfectly on its own; and then, in the same review, you can tell how this helps with the universe.
However, it s also your choice.
Again, thank you so much.
10710269
The stories part of the "Alfredverse" are:
- The Night of Truth.
- A Heart's Warming Eve Gift.
- The Weeping Winter (The first story, chronologically speaking).
- The Gala's Night.
- Never Dance Alone in Heart's Warming Eve (Canon Spin-off, not directly connected to the main character).
10710280
Sounds like a plan.