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Bronie312


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Frank Frederickson, known as the human who arrived at Equestria and revolutionized music, besides having befriended a particular group of ponies and other mythological creatures, begins to live his last days on Equestria after knowing he'll die. At the same time, he'll make the most effort to amend some errors from the past.


Authors Note: This is my last attempt of writing a story here, in FIMFiction. Please, don't be like other occasions and give this story an opportunity before judging it.

P.S: "Human" tag because of the principal character, who is the OC of this story.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 23 )

Not bad, but you do have some errors here and there. I do think this could turn out good, but you would need to get an editor and hammer out some of the kinks.

10245338
Alright, but I don't have money to pay an editor.

10245339
Uh huh, well you could look in the 'looking for editors' group, while a mixed bag you can find someone to edit for free.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
But i wish you luck with the story, and ill keep an eye on it.

Can’t wait to see where this goes, cuz you have me hooked!

10245454
I just hope everyone likes the development of this story, I'll admit something... in some parts, the story is a little... *How should I put this?* ...Rushed.

10245473
Eh, we all have those moments in writing. It’ll work out in the end though, trust me.

10245490
Wow... thank you, I actually haven't thought about it, so... yeah, thank you so much. I just hope you'll all enjoy this story.

10246088
By the way, a new chapter coming in a few hours, I hope you'll enjoy it as I enjoyed writing it. Title - Chapter 2: Telling the Truth.

10246088
Don’t mention it! Also, can’t wait for the next chap!

Can't wait for the next chapter. You got me hooked on this story.

10246465
Done and... DONE. New chapter uploaded.

10247058
Indeed, I’d say you’re doing a splendid job so far!

10247061
Thank you. I have to ask you, do you want me to upload a new chapter today or tomorrow?

10247062
It’s entirely up to you. After all, this is your story, and I can be patient for a good story.

10247064
Thank you for understanding. I just wanted to upload an extra chapter, but I read it 3 times and it was... the worst thing I could have ever written in my life. So, knowing that people wouldn't like it, I deleted it.

10247066
That‘s the way it is for us writers, review review review. But hey, you’ll do good, don’t worry.

10247068
Yeah, but still, I think it is best for this story to delete that chapter. I tried to make it better, but it became worse than before.

10247069
We can only learn from our mistakes to better improve ourselves. Again, you’ll get it with time!

10247075
Don’t mention it! After all, I’m here for the support of others!

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