I see you

Twilight and Anon are in a relationship for quite some time now, When Twilight went blind she's starting to feel that she was becoming a burden to her friends and especially to Anon. So Anon tried his best to prove that she will never be a burden and that he will always be by her side no matter what.

Will their love pierce through to such a challenge?

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I see You · 20th Apr 2021 · 2,284 words
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Cause Of Blindness:Flash Back · 20th Apr 2021 · 1,006 words
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Wickedkingken

Wickedkingken #1 · Apr 20th, 2021 · · · Cause Of Blindness:Flash Back ·

So sad

Horseus King of Horses

Horseus King of Horses #2 · Apr 20th, 2021 · · · Cause Of Blindness:Flash Back ·

Nice story, though it feels like the second chapter should've been the first chapter and the first chapter should've been the ending. Unless the whole thing is a flashback, which I don't mind.

zodia

zodia #3 · Apr 20th, 2021 · · · Cause Of Blindness:Flash Back ·

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The first one is just a summary and the part 1 is the start of the actual story

Horseus King of Horses

Horseus King of Horses #4 · Apr 20th, 2021 · · · Cause Of Blindness:Flash Back ·

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Actually, the first chapter feels more like it could work as a oneshot. Though it might raise some questions like "why is Twilight blind in the first place?" and such.

I personally think that the story would work better without the first chapter, or rather the first chapter is the last chapter of the story. Though it's your story, you do you.

Pete100