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I'm making a video game now. https://www.patreon.com/theblueninja


This story is a sequel to Rainbow Dash is Hitting on You

You are Rarity, a fashion designer in Ponyville, along with one of the few members of the Council of Friendship. Life is good, you are good, your friends are good...

Well, for the most part.

3 months. Rainbow Dash says that she'd been hitting on this stallion for 3 months now, and was getting nowhere. She needs your help! And yet, Rainbow is quite reluctant.

Pfft, khh. It's not like this happens everyday! She clearly doesn't know she needs some help with her potential stallionfriend. So you're going to go visit this 'Sunshine Sprite' character and explain all this to him, for both Rainbow and his own benefit.

After all, what could possibly go wrong?

Thanks to my editor, Android, for making sure things don't look sloppy.

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Comments ( 31 )

Thank you!

On a side note, I never gave any thought to what being inside Rarity's head would be like... I never, never want to do that ever again...

So, when do we get more??? :pinkiehappy:

Oh? So it worked? They got together? This is awesome!

This was weird but I kind of liked the whole sequel. I wished this was posted right at Valentine. Never actually read a second person story before.

You're just going to forget that she broke your door again, and that she's 'borrowed' your ice cream, since she's clearly in need of support.

1st option : she's 'borrowing' / 2nd option: she 'borrowed'

AHA! Rainbow Dashes workplace!

Dash's (i might be wrong by the way)

It's clear he's vary scared, but you don't care, he needs to hear this.


Will there be another sequel? well...

Okay not exactly what I hoped for, but I take another one-shot as well.

how he's missing these super obvious signals from his boss

I admit I would have liked it if Rainbow Dash would have actually really tried to hide it a bit more. I just thought she had tried to give him hints while they were more or less alone.

"HEY!" Rainbow yells, diving down to catch Sunshine in her grip. He squeaks, and curls up a bit as she holds him. "Stop running, alright!? I'm not going to hurt you."

Not sure why this disturbs me, I guess I have read to many storys with rather perverted characters at the moment.

Well not bad. It is quite funny in a way, and I don´t know what I said in the last chapter right now, but I´m pretty sure I hoped for something longer, and not quite a one-shot.

6958782 I think the Ice cream stains on the letter says otherwise.

Another sequel!

Rarity... could have handled that better. I feel sorry for the poor chap.

Oh, for God's sake, don't tell me this is turning into another one of those "would it matter" bandwagons.

Good sir, you may never understand our joy, but you must understand this: we need one more tale.

Please and thank you.

Sweet Celestia that guy's dense! How does he not recognize it when Rainbow was flirting with him?!

Sometimes the subtle method works and sometimes you just need to hurl the colt at the door ;-)

Nicely written.

6988430 I know how he feels...or doesn't feel? I'm confused :ajsleepy:

7039024 Well I'm glad someone does.
7023083 And in this case, it's the latter.


Rarity is the best Wing-Mare ever! Most excellent!

I found being inside of Rarity's head to be VERY entertaining!:raritystarry:
I wouldn't mind spending more time in there.

7480005 I hope you are either in the fashion industry, or a woman. If you are neither, then how on Earth did you enjoy that? :rainbowlaugh:

I am an unfashionable man, but I found Rarity's thoughts and degradation of patience to be funny.

7498224 Even I found them funny, but it still sent chills down my spine seeing the "you" before each of Rarity's thoughts. :derpytongue2:

It didn't bother me. There are a lot of fics, especially HiE's that have the reader riding shotgun in the character's mind.
Ex: You find it odd that pony door knobs are rounded or spherical, when two thirds of the population would have to use either their mouth or blunt hooves to manipulate the door knobs.

I also don't mind a bit of role-playing.

This was the funniest thing I've read this week! Soooo relatable. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

The greatest gift of all for any fan of MLP would be for Dash to hit on them...:raritywink:

Loved this chapter as well, great WORK! :twilightsmile:

Read this again, noticed you misspelled 'vary', it should be 'very', lol :twilightsheepish:

Pretty funny. Honestly I was thinking for a moment there he had actually fallen for Pinkie,

Terrible example of how to act? Check!
Pursuing a love interest (someone else's in this case) in a way that would probably get you arrested? Check!
Ending that should have horrendous consequences but still makes you smile? Check!

Great romantic comedy.

At least we learn something important in this story.

Comment posted by Sonicfury01 deleted Sep 9th, 2017
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