(Takes place after the Equestria Girls short: #FOMO) (Friendshipping One-Shot Series) After her surprise party; Rarity couldn’t feel any more proud after the tres magnifique party her friends gave her.
The only problem, Rainbow-Dash doesn’t feel the exact same way. In fact, she feels guilty for ditching her friend’s earlier offer to hang out. Seeing this as a chance to ignite a new spark in their friendship, Rarity offers to make it up to her friend by letting Rainbow be the center of an entire day.
After all, sometimes the best gift you can give to a friend; is you. 
Chapters (2)
This was a nice read. The biggest problem though is when sentences were abruptly broken, then continued in the next paragraph; this happens throughout the entire story.
Example:
It should read as:
You may also want to brush up on your grammer a bit.
Example:
Instead of:
You never use a period for a Said Tag, you use a comma instead (Exclamation Points & Question Marks are fine though.)
Here is the site writing guide that can help.
That said, its lovely to see Rarity trying to be a good friend.
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Thank you for the positive words and critiques on this story.
To be fair, I literally copy/pasted this story from a draft I had on google drive; and while I did make some slight edits, most of it is as is, and I couldn’t do too much to the format without taking too long to send the story out there.
Part 2 of this series is going to be kind of the same in the sense that this too would be from a google doc; but it should be very well improved.
As for the “said” tag thing, that might have been just a typo I haven’t noticed.
Thank you so much for the comment, and I’m glad you’re enjoying the story.
