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bad ship tbh
starburst and flashlight otp
To the author - What an interesting post xmas tale to see on this site...you're the second to write a story featuring this pairing!
love that sunburst is being assertive, kinky lil' stallion:)
p.s: ignore the haters they just don't like m/m stories or either hate on flash sentry
So yeah, unfortunately this story seems to be falling victim to either flash haters, or people that hate having their fragile ships damaged. Or people that demand very good grammar maybe.
The story was good
Nice hot M/M smut. I don’t claim to be perfect, but there was only one grammar or issue that I noticed that made me need to read it a couple times.
So if someone looks to the comments to gauge weather to read this, I’d recommend it.
Now, we *are* getting that foursome sequel, riiiight?
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Can you point any mistakes out, please? They must have slipped through while I proofread.
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I’m sorry, I would need to read through it again to find it, I don’t remember where it was or what it was about.
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Yeah, that's my fault.
I requested this pairing because I felt that I always wrote or requested the same thing over and over again, so I wanted something different and these two were the first who popped into my head lol
Thankyou for a lovely M/M story that has romance and a smol dom and showing the real struggle of someone trying to dom whilst not trying to finish themselves. I really enjoyed it.
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This comment alone made me read the story.
Awwww, this was very sweet.
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Always happy to see that someone appreciates the feedback!