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TheVClaw
I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.
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Worth the read! Has great set up for things to come.
Plus its got a really sweat ending to this part.
4 has yet to be written, right?
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No, part 4 is Sacrifice
Great way to start the story!
Personally not a fan of the 'blocked just before finished' cliche, but that's Discord humor for you.
Somber Tone sounds like a good-looking dude~
Though I have questions regarding the hypothetical of Rusty Shield as a character - If he looks that beta, and is that small, why would any college freshman think of him as a potential score; in fact, how could he have married the likes of Candy Heart to begin with (I mean, looks are given emphasis here, so I'm figuring looks have a lot of weight in choosing a partner)?
Ah, there's my tidbit!...Somewhat shorter than I expected it would be, but still good.
Also, these crystal ponies are way more kinky than I thought they'd be, I mean, seriously.
...Dear lord, I really hope Discord lets Sombra keep this enhancement. Look, I know Part 4 has been out for some time, but I'm not recalling any specific stats being given in Part 4, so goddammit I'm hoping for this. I mean, don't you want Sombra to be the best bull he can be?
That's it, Somber. Let it all hang out~ Really loving how He and Candy are being so passionate. Strangely I feel like that doesn't happen as much as it should, even though I know it does.
Hot damn, the dance between those two was hot! I really was expecting it to be just plain old dancing, but this is even better.
That said... Rusty getting knocked out with a bottle kinda spoiled the effect of the night. :(
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Well, I also mentioned that Rusty Shield is a top investor in Somber Tone's business. As far as the character is concerned, his assumed wealth is the biggest reason for having any women in his pathetic life. ;)
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I think that’s what the last chapter was for with Shining and Discord. The humiliation and depravation was all well and good for the group but no one has ever gotten hurt physically, or at least not in a way that would involve blood and danger to their lives, so it’s a little jarring.
We really don’t get any other info than they ended the night and Discord gives shining his consolation prize with Flurry.
Personally I’d like to think that Cadance had to held back by Sombra before blasting the person who hit shining while Sombra called for Discord to end the night. Then he distracted her with some good ol sex to end the night.
Damn good story. The dislikes are from haters, and punks.
Congrats on the story, and I look forward to more
While all the kinky stuff Is fun, this small interaction between the two ex villains is one of the best bits in the whole thing
Well...that was a lot better then what I suggested. Nice work as always dude
Edit: well this took some time to get through. Unfunny to think that this started as a one shot, but I really liked how this played out. And like I said, I much prefer with what you went with for the dance scene. The trio were pushing their luck all night and it was only matter of time before that reached up to them, at least Cadance and Sombra had a good time, though I wouldn’t mind hearing what happened after the fact in a Part 4 chapter, maybe just a throw away line.
Can’t wait for Sacrifice to continue, especially since we heading towards the big finale.
Oh this was a very fun story to read, I really did enjoy the part were Shining was turned into a middle aged balding stallion pervert, it was a fun reading through all of that hope to see more stories like that in the future.
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I thought you said somewhere that the reason Sacrifice wasn't called "Showing His Place 4" was because it was a "non-canon" "bad end" to the series, in contrast to the "true" part 4 that was planned eventually. I can't find the comment now, though, so maybe I'm just remembering your calling it "optional canon".
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I liked the concept but it's just going too far. Shining should still be given things and he should still have his limits as a well rounded character.
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money discord did say he was the chief Invester in sombra's "company".